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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 12:18 PM Title: Janine and Tom

If this were Scandinavian soft-core, they'd probably insert stock footage of a steam locomotive entering a tunnel, right about that last sentence.*

*Or, at least, that's what I've heard second-hand.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 4:51 PM Title: Janine and Tom

This was nice. Very nice after a week long break. I loved how Janine was still very sexy and she also seems changed since she was able to control her self.

Did Tom black out? What was that at the end? Tom gets pressed to the roof of his mouth all the time. Why was he seeing spots this time?

Very descriptive vagina navigating. It's like he was swimming, just moving his body around trying to get to where he wants to go.

I'm now wondering if Janine is going to keep Tom, or will she know that the right choice is to give him to Cassidy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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