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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2016 10:27 AM Title: Sisters

@TomSpeedy: the 11th time might be the charm.

"One never knows! Do one?"

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Date: July 18 2016 7:35 PM Title: Sisters

Hmm. I did not expect a chapter of this magnitude to show up.

Also, I didn't expect these sisters to be the sisters talking. When I saw the title, I thought Janine and Jessica. I forgot about these two.

Donatella is back! And fancy! I bet Tom Sr. Bought all that stuff for her. Donatella is lucky. Gets her own sex toy that brings in money.

So there is a cure! (Personally, this isn't a good thing, because I want Tom shrink forever.) I hope Donateela keeps Tom Sr. Away from the device as long as possible so they prolong the cure from being created.

Ella thought Lina would abduct Tom? Haha! I wish! The funny part is that Lina is the most gentle giantess ever and Ella seems furious about it!

I hope Tom Sr. talks to Ella saying that perhaps Tom enjoys being a tiny. Then Tom Sr. can list off his many experiences of fun and say how it's wonderful.

Now since Ella knows about Tom shrinking, will she play dumb when she arrives at Amina's house? Test Lina to see if she is lying? That might be interesting, but I would love to see Lina control that situation.

I think Donatella should visit the young Tom and show Tom Sr. to him. Then they could have a tiny to tiny talk.

Or Donatella should visit Lina, show off Tom Sr. And then Lina will desire Tom again.

Why are they checking on the device now? Wasn't Ella freakin out about Tom and wasn't she ready to go visit Tom? What happened? Did Tom Sr. distract her with his smile too? Man, it runs in the family. This gives more time for younger Tom to play.

3 years?!! Tom Sr. has been a sex toy for a hot 30 yr old for 3 years?! What?! That's heaven right there! I mean you don't even have to go to work. You can still watch Netflix and HBO and have sex and do all the fun you want and sleep with a hot model and you did this for 3 years? No one can be luckier than this man. Meet the luckiest man in the world: Tom Sr. (I'm so jealous.)

I love these surprise chapters that I wouldn't expect. Such a big plot reveal and important.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2016 6:55 PM Title: Sisters

I'm first for once? YAY ME!

Okay, for starters? You've once again pitched something from left field that nobody was expecting. Donatella and Tom Senior showing up out of the blue to confess all to Elle? Brilliant!! It makes the fifteen minutes I kept getting "site unreachable" worth the wait.

But, this raises the question: what's Lina going to do once she's confronted with the truth by both sisters? She sure as heck won't be able to continue with wanting to adopt Young Tom as a pet. Not after hearing about the near-disaster of introducing Jessica to him!

Of course, you'll probably say that Lina is both pragmatic and stubborn. She might have Janine hide Young Tom somewhere other than Kate and Cassidy's apartment. And who could be more trustworthy with such a unique secret than a lawyer like...Serena? ;-D

Of course, Jessica--being just as stubborn as her mother--could still be a wild card player in this deal. And spirit him away to someplace unexpected. (like, say, her out-of-state college) without anybody initially aware of it.

So many confusing possibilities.

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