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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 9:23 PM Title: Damn the Torpedoes

Sorry! I was just trying to imagine him as one of those jailhouse poets. Given the (ahem!) solitary confinement his mother is most likely going to subject him to, in the next chapter.*

*Unless, of course, you twist the plot, yet again! ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 9:20 PM Title: Damn the Torpedoes

"I cannot live each moment...
In fear..trying to anticipate
Every...threat that might appear."

"I do not like green eggs and ham.
I prefer Janine, Katie, Cassidy, and Sam."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 5:05 PM Title: Damn the Torpedoes

Tom has a great point. While he is still kinda injured, he will be resting for life in a few days, so I agree that he might as well make these next 2 days memorable.

It's funny, that even though Tom is injured, he still has his charm. Sometimes the injury, especially in the face might just make that charm not that powerful, but Tom still knows how to look attractive even with a scar on his head. Maybe he looks more badass with the scar. Maybe the scar is what attracts these ladies.

Heck, yeah! Round 2 with the sexy nurse/teacher coming up! This duo is my favorite and I don't blame Tom for taking this chance. Both of them are sexy, know how to take control and also these two have great chemistry which makes the fun seem perfect for Tom.

Haha! Now we actually get to see Katie "screw the living day lights" out of Tom. I can't wait for that.

I really can't wait for the next chapter!

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