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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2016 7:36 PM Title: Ulterior

Ah, yes! The moment that I've truly dreaded more than the arrival of Tom's mother. The involvement of...

The Lady Lawyer! :-O

Author's Response:

Lol, heretofore and forthwith, abiding by the requirements and strictures of the aforementioned article contained in sub paragraph four pursuant to clause three.....ARGGGH! legal speak!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2016 4:40 PM Title: Ulterior

There we go! Lina is still the clever one in this situation. She had control over the entire conversation. She succeeded in convincing Tess to hold off the text and even scheduled a time for Tess to bring Tom to Lina's house.

We have seen Lina mention Serena a few times before. At first, she wanted all of Cassidy's info which still doesn't make sense to me becuase she didn't seem to do anything with it. Now they will talk again, and I'm sure it's about Tom and his mother instead.

I think the moment when Tom disagreed with Lina was what convinced Tess that Lina was trully on her side. However, I think Lina said this just to get on Tess's side.

Since Tom is sleeping and resting, will he be somewhat recovered for a fun time part 2 with Katie and Cassidy, or is it too soon? I know Tom isn't 100%, but I wonder how long until he is fine enough to handle them.

I bet when Lina gets Tom on Friday, they are going to have some fun before Raphaella shows up. Who knows? Maybe Tom is pleasing Lina while she picks up Raphaella. Wouldn't that be fun.

Serena Hall hasn't done anything and I think that alone makes this cliffhanger not as exciting as your usual cliffhangers.

I wonder who gets the next chapter? Lina and Serena or Cassidy and Tom? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

More talk next chapter, but soon Tom, soon

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