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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 10:31 PM Title: Tess

Chpt 104. Tess

Alright Tess!

She's standing up for herself.  She's done being an emotional punching bag.  Good on her!  She has bourn the brunt of everybody else's craziness and she's done.  I say good!

And she seems to be inspiring the nutty women around her to see Tom as a human being. (I'm not sure in Lina's case.)  Good going girl!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 7:58 AM Title: Tess

@ Hector: Not so much a bad "guy" as a devious anti-heroine. After all; let's not forget the peculiar line of research she asked Serena to conduct. She didn't do that out of concern for Ella's maternal instincts! I'm unalterably convinced that she's just as obsessed as ever with having Tom purely as a combination pet and living sex toy. Just as obsessed as Jessica, in fact! But, mature enough to control it, better.

"That's my theory, and I'm stickin' to it." :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 8:15 PM Title: Tess

Well? It looks like we're back to one of two alternatives. Either Jessica running back to her college sorority (Tom and all); or Lina and Tom's aunt shrink-napping his mom.

Of course, if Duggernaut can formulate a third alternative, then he's even more of a literary genius than we previously thought!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 7:35 PM Title: Tess

Aw, Tess. Don't be a party pooper. Tom is just having some fun. No need to worry about it.

Well, Tess does have a point. Tom is being passed around from girl to woman and I bet that she feels morally wrong to let Tom have this life.

It reminds me of the party for Janine where all the girls were asking about Tom and Tess kept shrugging it off. She knows that Tom is an attractive piece for these girls and I think this situation reminds Tess of that.

While Tess is right, I hope her decision gets overturned. I just can't suppress how much I love Tom to be this awesome toy passed around.

One issue that these characters gotta deal with is Tom's mom. I mean, it feels like the mention of her name gets people worried and see her as a wall between them and Tom.

Also, if Tess tells the truth to her mom, then Lina loses her credibility for her word. Now, Raphaella will be suspicious if she knows that Lina lied to her.

Cassidy also has an interesting take. She seeks desire through Tom, but also as a nurse, she seeks the need to help him recover. This conflicts her decisions and now to add Tom's mom to the plate may stress Cassidy out on what to do with him.

It seems at this point in the story, the character are also determining where should Tom go, just like us readers. We all have our own opinions for Tom, and these characters are also debating it.

I put my self in Tom's shoes and I think that I am fine and that these scars are nothing. )But that's just the inner Tom talking.) I really have no idea who gets Tom.

So many possibilities, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 7:03 PM Title: Tess

Looks like Tessa cares more about Tom's wellbeing

than Tom himself does.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 6:53 PM Title: Tess

Tom raised a hand and waved, “Giant Tess,” he greeted. Clever.


Otherwise, it looks like we're seeing people starting to rein Tom in, and put a damper on his adventuring ways. Let's see how that works out.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2016 4:38 PM Title: Tess

I can't blame Tess and by the sound of it, neither can Cassidy. Tom is constantly in danger and he clearly can't take care of himself. 

Hell, even Lina couldn't put up much of an argument with Tom in the state he currently is. I can't tell of Lina is worried about Tom's health though. 

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