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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 6:23 AM Title: Girl, You’ll Be a Woman Soon

I think Lina is finally going to have tell Serena Atlaw the truth (the whole truth, and nothing but...) in order to keep Tom and his mother from getting prematurely reunited.

Author's Response:

Seems like things are moving in that direction 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 8:57 PM Title: Girl, You’ll Be a Woman Soon

Sounds like Lina didn't know how bad things were between Tom and Janine. I mean, i think she knew Janine was rough, but not that rough. 



Author's Response:

Eye opening to say the least...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 7:57 PM Title: Girl, You’ll Be a Woman Soon

Another nicely poignant interlude.

How do you do it, dude? :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you. I wanted Janine to be more than a horny sadistic energizer bunny

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 5:38 PM Title: Girl, You’ll Be a Woman Soon

While I'm not a fan of these back to back weepy chapters, I kinda liked this one over the previous one.

I enjoyed the conversation about how Janine used Tom. I was wondering if Lina was going to tell Janine about her experience, you know, to share ideas. Like when Lina was doing sit-ups, she had Tom inside her the whole time.

Part of me still feels that Janine is acting, just so Lina feels the need to comfort her and let her guard down. I still have a little grudge that Janine still has bits of evil in her.

Good point. Lina has to hide Janine while Raphaella shows up. Haha! I wonder how that will work. (Isn't Lina rich enough to afford few nights at a hotel for Janine? I think that can work.)

I bet if Lina didn't show up to Cassidy's place, Miss Harwood would be there instead. Then we can have round 2! But since Lina is driving there, that means that another conversation has to take place.

Lina and Cassidy. What a lovely combination. In fact, these 2 women were the nicest of the bunch. They treated Tom nicely and communicated fairly.

I think Tom knows Lina is careful and will be ok with her holding him. I don't about Cassidy though. I think Cassidy will be all over Lina thinking, "why are you here!!!!" and reject her like Jessica and Janine. But in the end, it's Tom's choice.

I wodner what Lina is going to do over at Cassidy's. She can't really take Tom. Cassidy is the nurse and he still needs healing. What is Lina going to talk about? Apologizing for Jessica and the deal? Well, she can apologize, but the deal is off. No way will Cassidy negotiate with a Lindholm again.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Time to come at this from a different angle.  To say Cassidy is leary is an understatement. Things are moving quickly now :)

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