[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 10:20 PM Title: Lina
102. Lina.
Ya gotta admit...when your own mother is suspicious of your tears...you've been a cunt.
Good luck Janine.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2016 8:06 AM Title: Lina
All I can say is...nice job of finally humanizing Janine. It makes me think that there might still be hope for Jessica. Unless, of course, she does something even more stupid!*
*Like, say, running back to her college sorority (Tom and all).
Author's Response:
Maybe if she hadn't dropped him he would already be on his way to Omega Pi. ;)
[Report This]Date: June 24 2016 11:30 PM Title: Lina
Wow, so it looks like Janine is having some actual character development! I never expected character developmemt much less of Janine in a story like this.
Author's Response:
Hopefully it adds to the flavor of the story. Now the million dollar question is it real or just another scheme? :)
[Report This]Date: June 24 2016 8:53 PM Title: Lina
Man, this chapter felt depressing. It was just them reflecting on what happened in the previous chapter.
I thought this reflecting about that "accident" would be a simple:
(Lina watched as her daughters arrived home with glum faces. She could tell that things didn't go as planned. She talked to both of them and learned about how this incident has jeapordized her reunion with Tom. With Raphaella a problem enough, things just keep going south. Lina called Cassidy and apologized for everything. Lina tried another approach, but was rejected just as Raphaella couldn't be convinced also. Lina decided it was time to call Tess. She couldn't wait any longer.)
That could be the 1st half of the chapter, then we catch up to Cassidy and Tom.
I just didn't expect so much sadness in one chapter. Now I feel sad. Well, I guess all the good stories have some moments like this.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Character building... :(