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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 10:15 PM Title: Catlike Reflexes

101. Cat like reflexes.

Okay...uh...that was pretty intense.

And it kind of seemed real.

....Did you know it was possible to survive jumping off the golden gate bridge?

It is.  Your odds aren't good, like 2 percent, so don't try it.  And besides, you aren't suicidal.  But, do you know what 100 percent of the people attempting suicide describe the second they let go of that bridge?

Regret.

Every fucking one of them, they see clearly that they have made a mistake and regret smacks them in the face. 

It could be that Janine's actions are an extension of her selfishness, she wants to keep her toy.  But wow...you captured that moment.  That...not clarity...that moment of overwhelming regret.

I have to admit...I would see Janine as having burned every bridge between her and Tom.  Litterally being, at best, the embodiment of Depraved Indifference (willing to use him to the point of his death...infact revelling in the idea) is a pretty black mark against her.

But wow, what a moment....

I'm not going to hold my breath to see if she can develop anything resembling compassion....so far she doesn't seem to have the toolkit...but maybe she can start with something like guilt...again, not holding my breath.

Of course it could also be this is like the hospital tears...a drug induced (in this case, stress induced) anomolie.  I'm really not to prepared to invest in her emotionally, but if she does start to seek some kind of...trip on the road to redemtion...I'd be with her on the journey....

You are an incredible writer...this is so...true.  A 10 rating is not high enough.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 7:55 PM Title: Catlike Reflexes

Wow! I thought this chapter was never going to come. Last chapter I believe was on Wednesday. I know I shouldn't even bother criticizing on the rare you upload, but I just got worried when I saw nothing the last few days.

Ok, now let's get back to the chapter.

As soon as I saw the title, I thought, yay, he is saved. (Of course.) but then u threw in a twist. You actually had Janine miss the catch and Tom goes spiraling out of control and into the floor. That fruit metaphor was very effective. Made me shiver at what was left of Tom.

I totally agree with Geeman. Janine is no better than Jessica. Like what does Janine know about being careful and concerned for others? Jessica just showed how messed up the Lindholms truly are. (Except Lina. She is still a sexy gentle Milf.)

So how will this recovery affect the story? I hope Cassidy does some super healing thing where she discovers that Tom's body heals at a faster rate than a regular sized person.

Cassidy could also take advantage of this situation. She can have Tom make a full recovery but fake it to everyone and say that he still is injured. That way she can have Tom all to herself. (And Katie of course.)

Lina is going to be pissed now that her plan to get Tom has another dilemma. I wonder if Lina is still allowed to see Tom after all that. (I'm sure Tom approves.)

Wow, never seen Cassidy erupt like that before. She really cares for Tom. However, I'm still thinking she thought "my sex toy got hurt!" Instead of "Tom for hurt!". Well, we know Miss Harwood would've thought sexy toy > Tom. Haha!

Maybe Miss Harwood has this skin perfecting cream that she uses for her flawless body and let's Tom have some to heal him up. (I know it's a stupid idea, but hey, shrinking works, so why not this. )

Part of me feels like this is a great way to focus on certain characters over others. Now Janine and Jessica are out of the picture, which means more time with Cassidy! Hooray!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Been pretty busy with school wrapping up and work and stuff so updates were put on hold. this twist at least didn't leave you hanging at the end with the "Is tom dead?" notion again. Trying to keep it interesting without replicating story elements too many times. How many times have i told you, never ever ever count Janine out. Most everybody intensley dislikes her because she is ruthless in her use of tom. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 6:18 PM Title: Catlike Reflexes

Masterfully poignant installment.

Author's Response:

Thank you ever so much good sir

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 5:28 PM Title: Catlike Reflexes

How can Janine criticize her sister after all she's done? She almost swallowed the poor guy on purpose just to see what it'd feel like! She's a horrible person just like her sister if not worse! Anyway, I think Tom should stay far the he'll away from Janine or any of her kin if he knows what's good for him! Maybe Janine has had an epiphany about what a shitty person she is but if I was Tom I wouldn't risk it! Pretty much every girl in this series has been rough with him too, this guy has limits no matter how cocky he gets!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review geeman! It's like the pot calling the kettle black, right? The only one who hasn't mistreated Tom was Tess, ALL the rest of them to some degree have exploited his stature to varying degree, to which Janine has been by far the most domineering (and maybe Miss Wingnut Addison and her collection of fairy figurines!). We'll explore some of the recent character displays in the next few chapters as thing countdown to the arrival of tom's mother. 

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