Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 2:34 PM Title: Wednesday Morning

I just can't wait for the anniversary chapter 100!

I am really not sure about Jessica. She is kind of childish which turns me off. But maybe we will be surprised.

Author's Response:

I know right! While I would like for chapter 100 to be epic...Two points of view two cliffhangers. Hmm in the end it will be up to the reader's whether or not it lived up to the billing. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 11:33 AM Title: Wednesday Morning

I'm at this point where Janine just fell off the excitement list. As Tom waits for Janine, I think his time with Cassidy and Miss Harwood showed him what real women like to do with him, and not teenage girls like Janine.

I think I am more interested in Jessica and her reaction. Does she know who Tom is? Does she know how attractive he is? Will he fall under the same spell as her mother and sister?

Then there is tonight. Wow, your writing made last night feel like it was a one time thing becuase you had so much detail and had 2 chapters describing that night. Now we get round 2!

I love how they say that they will get creative and use some toys. The only thing that I feel hesitant to judge on is how the toy will be used. Everytime, it is the same thing, Tom gets tied to it and it goes inside a woman. While that is awesome, it's getting a bit repetitive.

Maybe a threesome with a toy will be better than I think. Perhaps there is a double sided dildo and Tom can be inside both women at the same time.

I think they should get like gummy bears and tease Tom by playing with the gummy bears beforehand. They can lick it, chew, and even shove it inside them.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You're so close to where I was going to go with this threesome but alas next chapter chapter 100 will not be that installment. Sorry. Doesn't mean I won't unless it a little later though Muwahaha