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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 9:44 PM Title: Donatella

Chpt 98, Donatella.

To be honest...kind of hard to got with this one.

All that talk of being in a home?  How did that come about?  Did Tom2 or Mom just let Donatella keep their dad in a cage...kind of ugly.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 9:27 AM Title: Donatella

What a great surprise this chapter!

So aunt Donatella is a sybarite with strong appetites and she keeps Thomas Sr. for her pleasure :-D.

The smile on her face and the way how she talks to him looks like she is delighted he gave her a reason to punish him. Sounds like she is going to have some fun.

I would definitely love if you continue in this thread. I would like to hear more about her appetites and how she treats Thomas Sr.
(I would wish she is very very very dominant (but not abusive) and Tom Sr. is submissive like his grandson. I can imagine she likes he is very intelligent, gentleman and has style.)

How long is he with her?

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2016 10:14 PM Title: Donatella

Uh-oh! Sounds like TW-1 has become quite the little masochist during his captivity. Indeed, I often tell anyone who asks (and, more often, even when they don't) that--unlike Major Nelson--I would've VOLUNTEERED to spend life without parole in a birdcage surrounded by harem girls and belly dancers! But, I guess that's just me.

OK! Being serious, now. As overused as this word might be, "brilliant" is the only way I can think of to describe this latest plot twist. Tom's namesake grandfather was captured by his mother's horny sister?! I truly did not see that coming. I'd privately assumed he was in some top-secret government lab. "Protective custody" granted by the same Feds for whom he might've developed the shrink ray (as, say, a forensically undetectable weapon for "terminations with extreme prejudice").

This is one of those rare instances I'm glad I guessed wrong.

Author's Response:

I too think I may also volunteered. From the outset I had Tom Sr a victim of his own invention and falling into the Hans of whoever found they only thing I vacillated about was who. The sister of Tom's mother provided my an opportunity to tie this up. It is good to veer from expectation and surprise once in a while. Talk about assisted care living...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2016 8:04 PM Title: Donatella

Wowowowowwo! I mean, did that just happen?!

I have never ever ever seen this coming! It's so weird yet so hot!

I mean, you tied up this loose end in a way I never would have imagined!

So basically Tom's Aunt has his grandpa as a pet. (So Donatella is Tom wentworth sr's niece.)

Why is Donatella into that mature guys? I have no idea but hey, I like mature women. Just not that old. I prefer the 30-40 range. She likes the 50-60 range.

She keeps the grandpa as a pet? Does he still have stamina? How is he still charming? Haha!

Man, I wish this happened with Miss Harwood. Keep Tom as her teacher's pet for many years.

Duggrnaut, did you plan this grandpa thing for months? Becuase it makes perfect sense why he can't reply that often.

Wow, Tom's aunt is in modeling? These tense must run in the family. I wish Donatella found me instead of Tom's grandpa. Being kept as her pet doesn't sound so bad.

Also, she was going to punish him. Boy, that sounds awesome! While this chapter was random, I needed this.

If Tom thought he was living the life, he has no idea! Haha! Tom's grandpa is living the dream! A high 20s girl got him and she is a model!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi Tom yep I had Tom Sr fall prey from the the get go though I did wrestle with who I wanted to have find him. There is no biological relation between Tom Sr and donatella. She is the sister of his daughter in law.she was one of the people who helped Janine originally get into modelling though even she was unaware of the family connection to Tom.  Right in the first chapter I state tom's mother was also a model so it runs in the family. I wonder what would happen if he choked down a viagra would it make his whole body stiff?

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