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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 6:37 AM Title: Tom

Nice chapter! I liked that ignoring aspect - when after using him the whole day she just dropped him down trapped inside her soiled panties and not even looking at him she told him to stay before leaving the room - that was a very nice moment demonstrating how dominant and superior she must feel.

Also Tom likes to be dominated. However he must still learn to be respectful and obedient. E.g. his previous unauthorized ejaculation inside her panties and now he was told to stay but he left the room and almost got injured (or maybe even killed) causing possibly also big troubles to Katie and Cassidy. Also his thinking about himself like an alpha male does not indicate he feels submissive.

His attitude and behavior is in contrary with Katie's dominance so I am curious how she is going to deal with that. I think she should reaffirm her authority by an appropriate punishment. However after the punishment I would love to see Tom feels submissive and honestly regrets his behavior. And then she will give him a chance to show his regret and obtain the forgiveness ;-). After that she can say "good boy" and everything would be ok again :-).

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 6:18 AM Title: Tom

@ Tom Speedy (while imitating Fred Rogers of MR. ROGERS' NEIGHBORHOOD):

Can you say "malicious mischief?"

I knew you couldn't. Mr. Duggernaut was just messing with your head!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 6:37 PM Title: Tom

It just went from sexy to scary. I'm scared that the fun is over. That Miss Harwood will start feeling sorry and won't be in control again. I enjoyed that and if she starts feeling guilty, then I'm not sure how Tom will like her.

Is this just a transition so Cassidy can "nurse" Tom again? I can see a hurt Tom being helped by her.

Maybe this was just a scare, perhaps Tom dodged her foot and is actually between her feet getting a nice view upskirt.

Or Miss Harwood actually saw Tom and is playfully stepping on him with little pressure.

Worst possible outcome is Tom dies and the end. Now I hope that is not the case. (insert nervous laugh).

I kinda can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

...it's been a good run...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 6:36 PM Title: Tom

Oh, dear! Is there where the usual stereotype of previously undiscovered indestructibility comes into play?

Author's Response:

No such luck for Tom, we've already established he can be hurt... (indestructability just seems like a cheat, like a dream sequence or something, just saying :)

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