[Report This]Date: May 15 2016 2:06 AM Title: Afternoon
I think now I understood the reason why she created that tube - to improve breathing while he is inside.
I liked the teasing & denial scene - his growing frustration and her having fun from not letting him cum.
So I am really curious what is going to happen when she discovers her little slave had an unauthorized "accident" in her panties. Will she make him understand better not to do it again? ;-) That he can cum only if he is allowed?
Also, his attitude and the way he talks to her seems like he is getting out of his submissive mood. As if he checks boundaries. Will she remind him his place? ;-)
I would love if she makes him whimpering and squirming while using him for her pleasure. And his erected miniature penis would tell her he likes how she treats him and he likes to be her little whatever she wants.
I loved the idea with the opening just for his head.
I am looking forward for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2016 1:26 PM Title: Afternoon
In keeping with the pun in my previous review? Right now, Katie is probably thinking: "Oh, yes, Tom! I want 'sodom' more!"
Good thing Timescribe is on hiatus from here. He might not approve of pseudo-Biblical plays on words.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2016 8:10 PM Title: Afternoon
This chapter felt kinda short this time. I noticed it was your first chapter below 1000 words since the last 10+ chapters.
Also, I actually liked his position tied to a pen inside her. I wished there was a sense of time while he was in there. After she puts him inside her at the end of last chapter, she pulls him out at the beginning of this chapter, so it feels like he was in there for very little time.
I would love to hear Miss Harwood's thoughts as he is down there. Perhaps, she can think of ways to plays with Tom. Maybe imagine what he is doing inside her. Also, she can think about giving him a playful squeeze inside her.
Wait a minute! The panties were in the drawer! She left the classroom last chapter, and didn't return until this chapter. So something must have hallened between the chapters that I don't know yet.
She just came in class? Any noise or movement in front of the class? Or is she just a natural and hiding it? Perhaps Katie orgasms in public places all the the time and she mastered controlling her posture as she does this.
I mean, Katie is not even moaning or anything when Tom pleases her. She just bucks her hips a little and she just explodes right there, in front of her classroom. Nothing wrong here folks.
Oohhhh! Maybe Tom wasn't supposed to make here come, and she is going to punish him! Oh boy!
I can't wait for the next chapter!