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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2016 10:22 AM Title: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

I like very much Katie is much more talking to Tom in this chapter. It really improves the quality and the reading experience. If possible please continue in this and incorporate such dialogues into your next writings.

I like Katie's dominance is natural and she feels comfortable giving him orders, teasing him, humiliating him and of course using him as she wants. She clearly gets pleasure from dominating Tom and having him helpless. However she does it the way it wakes his submissive site up. She understands how to play with him to press his submissive buttons - so he is aroused and he wants to be helpless at her mercy and used :-) Actually he wants that she wants to use him :-).

I like you always bring some small details I enjoy :-). E.g. in this chapter I liked how on purpose she put down the pen tube and the elastic band in front of him just to make him nervous and excited what she is going to do to him. And then just ordering him to lay and fastening him to that tube to make him helpless - very nice moment.

Then "tormenting" helpless Tom at Janine seat by lowering her ass was also very nice. I liked she laughed when he got scary.

And then the amazing moment was when she brought him very close to the climax but then denied him the pleasure by moving him away - that was an excellent moment. I like very much she controls his orgasms - keeping him constantly aroused increases even more his desire for her. I would really love if you continue to include this teasing & denial aspect into the story :-)

I have a feeling Katie created that pen tube on purpose and she is not done with it yet ;-). 

She put her panties into the drawer and unlocked the doors. I am curious. Probably she is not going to leave the class room for long because somebody could easily discover the panties. Also if she walks without panties somebody could see it e.g. at staircase. Also teaching without panties with pen tube inside would not be probably very comfortable - maybe I am wrong. I have a feeling something else is going to happen. But what?

I am looking forward for the next chapter :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lengthy review. Based on some feedback I thought a dialogue rich chapter could help explore the dynamic forming between these two. I'm not sure the pen was comfortable for either of them but it was a means of keeping him within her for an extended period  of time. More to come 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lengthy review. Based on some feedback I thought a dialogue rich chapter could help explore the dynamic forming between these two. I'm not sure the pen was comfortable for either of them but it was a means of keeping him within her for an extended period  of time. More to come 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2016 7:45 AM Title: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

great chapter!
More please!
I'm curious to see how it looks from the point of view of toma
as long as there is tom
or Katie will be able to hear the tom
  the tom will be heard katie



Author's Response:

Thanks I will keep them coming!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 7:46 PM Title: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

So, he's going to spend "gamore" time in her nether-portions? I wonder if Tom is going to regard that as a mixed blessing?

Author's Response:

Pike a stewed prune or tom-ato!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 6:08 PM Title: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

Well, the pen and rubber bands meant that he was being tied up after all. I was expecting some fancy device, but in the end, she just wanted to tie him up.

All those pieces being removed from the pen was just so nothing falls off when it's inside Miss Harwood's vagina! That's all! I thought there was some special thing she was going to put in the tube or something. Haha! Boy, I was overthinking this.

While I was at first dissapointed by a simple tie up, I was amazed at this chapter for another thing: dialogue.

You wrote so many things for Miss Harwood to say, that I agree with Tom, this stuff is arousing! Especially when she talks about Janine, Tatiana, and Samira. It shows how much Katie knows about Tom's gazing and it also means that she probably knows how much he has been staring at her too!

Then near the end, she says that this is her classroom and that Tom belongs to Miss Harwood, I almost melted. That was fantastic! It might mean little to other people, but it's this sense of authority that gets me going from Miss Harwood.

I just realized something. This is the first time a giantess left Tom inside her vagina with him being tied to something. All the previous times, a hairbrush, the dildos, Tom was taken back out after the fun. But this time, Miss Harwood just leaves him there, inside her vagina, all tied up! Beautiful! It's like lunch time detention!

When Katie put Tom on Janine's seat, I thought this was going to be a transition chapter, where Janine gets Tom again. While Janine is very sexy, I don't think anyone can top Miss Harwood right now. I mean, her authority, her dominance, her control, so mesmerizing! I wish I was Tom!

One thing you forgot to mention was did she insert him headfirst or feet first?

You told me in a previous review that she wasn't done with Tom and her panties. So now I'm curious as to why she put them in her drawer. Was that just to prove that yeah, she doesn't wear panties while she teaches, or so feels confident? I don't know.

This chapter had the perfect balance of dialogue and action. Took Tom out, tied him up. Talked about the girls, used Janine's desk, said he belonged to Katie in the classroom, inserted him inside her. Amazing!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint in regards to the pen and elastics. Nothing fiendishly clever on my part. Other than that I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

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