Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 9:46 AM Title: Back to School

Great chapter!

I like how Tom realizes that while all males lust for Miss Harwood he is in a completely opposite situation - she lusts after him. And actually not only that. She lusts for him so much she turned him into her little sex slave and uses him the most intimate way whenever and however she wants - and what more could a submissive male ask for? ;-)

The toilet scene where she rubs her juices over his face is very hot. It demonstrates how much control she has over him. She knows this slightly humiliating / torturing gesture is a treat for her little submissive slave which just arouses him and increases so his desire for her. Pleased then with the result she smiles and gently strokes his little bulge :-)

I also like very much she intends to control his orgasms. When he tries to rub his hips against her stroking finger she withdraws and says “If you’re a good boy, maybe I will let you release,” - that was an excellent moment. Controlling his orgasms greatly increases her power over him and provides new possibilities to dominate him. E.g. few days without orgasm will make him very docile and very eager to please her - I would love if you somehow incorporate this aspect into the story. (Maybe a miniature chastity device could be made for Tom in some future chapter.)

And finally I am very very very curious about that upcoming one-on-one quality time. I am kind of scary for Tom (but at the same time kind of excited) for what that pencil tube and the band are going to be used. The fact she created the tube means she wants to put something through that. Some liquid?

I really cannot wait how this continues.

 

Author's Response:

So many possibilities. I guess we shall see soon enough. I do plan to show more of miss Harwoods comfort with assuming a dominant position shortly

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2016 5:37 PM Title: Back to School

Another super hot chapter! Arguable another one of the hottest chapters on this story!

I always had this dream of a sexy teacher using me for her pleasure in her panties and there was nothing I could do about it. Tom is living the dream!

Wow! Love the part when you mentioned all these guys trying to hit on Miss Harwood but she denies them and Tom is the one pleasuring her. Of all men, it's Tom! That must make him feel special.

Good metaphor of the lioness and the lambs. She wants to be in control of her relationship and all these guys want to be the one having their way with her. However, she is the one having her way with Tom which suites her perfectly.

When Tess thanked Kate for "caring" about Tom, I laughed. Yep, she is caring for him really good.

One thing I think I need to clear up is how is this pouch in her panties. Can you describe the position again more clearly? I'm picturing like a shirt pocket that is holding him like bed sheets on a bed. Also, how high is this fabric to Tom's body. All the way up to his neck? His chest? I'm still unsure about his position.

Another thing I wonder is what exactly happened in the 2nd to last paragraph? ("And neatly the refill"?) ("Punctured the stopper and the other end of the tube"?) Could you clarify these two parts?

Lastly, is he being tied up to a pen now? I hope not. I love Tom's position right where it is now. I want him to stay there forever, and even after school. Will he get detention? Is this next one on one thing going to be detention?

So many questions! I want to know the answers right now, I'm so excited!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the heads up Tom, i fixed those thing you mentioned. The sheer tight elastic fabric completely covers him. Like the pocket you mention, but super snug. Hope that helps. As far as the panties prison goes, have faith, this day is not done. :)