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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 9:32 AM Title: Tuesday Morning

Another very nice chapter!

I like you wrote Tom's mind is inhabited by his gorgeous teacher and then later on he had an erection which she noticed - that was a nice moment. Whether he wants it or not he likes how she treats him ;-) 
And she can smile how her little pet just gets aroused as a response to all of that - it would not take long to have him craving to serve her even more :-)

The drying scene ending with "Good boy" was very nice too.

I liked very much the idea with the sheer translucent fabric. It was very nice and a creative surprise. I find it more erotic and sophisticated than just sewing his limbs. Also it seems quite practical. If she needs she can easily remove him and then put him back right away.

I would really love if you can reveal more of their emotions. She could talk to him a bit more. E.g. teasing him like "Somebody is excited to be my little pet.", "My ass needs an attention.", "Would you like to be my ass-candy ?" ;-),  "Beg me to .... ", etc.

Thanks for such great story I am really looking forward for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the props. I like the idea of the fabric better than stitching his limbs in place, you see why in an upcoming chapter, there's things she can do that wouldn't otherwise be able to if he was part of her underwear... :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 8:01 PM Title: Tuesday Morning

Never has the phrase "Be careful what you wish for..." ever been more comprehensible to someone than it must be to Tom, right at this moment.

Author's Response:

I was thinking perhaps whne Janine had him tethered to her little toy as her bottom was descending down over him, that thought may have occurred to him, kind of like, "Hmm, I might not have thought this one through carefully enough..."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 5:52 PM Title: Tuesday Morning

That was amazing. I love her confidence and the way she smiles at everything she does.

I prefer that he was tied to her panties with like 4 pieces of thread on his wrists and ankles instead, but this is still freaking sexy.

I think she needs to talk seductlively to Tom. Like "you will be down there all day".

You do a great job with her thoughts and Tom's thoughts.

Man, water boarding?!! I never even thought of this sexy position to be that torturous! It makes sense, don't get me wrong. I have always thought that position was the dream. Now you got me thinking otherwise. :(

Is this gusset thing secure? He says its tight, but I imagine that he would be more secure if his limbs were literally tied to her panties. I have this feeling he may fall out. (But I don't want him to.)

I have this crazy idea. What if she teaches sex Ed? Wouldn't that be something. She is teaching about sex and reproductive organs all while Tom is getting a hands on experience of it. Or a biology lesson would be ok too.

I would love it if she kept him in her panties all day and perhaps changed into some tight yoga pants for her yoga excercises. Who knows, that's probably going to happen since Cassidy takes yoga too. Imagine Katie doing the splits while Tom is stuck there! Amazing!

In the classroom, I hope Miss Harwood crosses her legs a lot. She can feel him struggling down there and will enjoy it. That should keep Miss Harwood really happy knowing he is "safe" down there.

So many idea! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wanted her to be self assured and aware of how her presences affects others and fills her with a confidence that makes her emile. I think we all know he will be there for the duration of the school day, more or lessw, but it's the night that may hold some interest with Katie and Cassidy. We'll see...

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