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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 12:02 AM Title: Finish What You Started

I like Katie's dominant attitude. She knows what she wants and she will get it. She makes very clear to Tom it is HER pleasure what matters and that she will have him her way i.e. she will dominate him. Which must be so delightful for natural submissive like Tom - being helpless and under the control of dominant woman using him for her delight :-) 

Same like in previous chapters I like very much small creative details like 'come hither beckoning motioning with the index finger' :-) I also like very much the idea with cocooning him into her used panties which she explicitly searched in her laundry hamper - this was a very nice moment :-)

It would be really great if you could be more descriptive about emotions. Revealing so she gets also a mental satisfaction from things she is doing to Tom. E.g. if she talks to him a teasing way and then enjoying his reactions.

I am really looking forward for the next chapter. Her sewing project will allow Tom to cuddle as he wished :-D.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 7:14 AM Title: Finish What You Started

@Hector: Nope! His monstrous namesake.*


*I know the conflation is technically incorrect. But, I wanted to save myself some typist's cramp. ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2016 6:44 PM Title: Finish What You Started

Congratulations, Tom. You've turned Ms. Harwood into a sexual Frankenstein.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2016 12:48 PM Title: Finish What You Started

One thing I love about her is that it's her constant desire for sex. I mean, Janine and Cassidy had a bit of it, but it feels like Katie is super horny. I love it!

That panty cacoon is actually a smart idea. She wants Tom to sleep and the last thing he will remember is the sex they had. Also, he goes to sleep smelling her scent which may influence his dreams. Haha!

I have a really good feeling about the next chapter. It seems like she has school tomorrow and she is going to take Tom with her! I think it's also a good time she puts that sewing project to good use.

I think she is my new favorite character, yes, even over Lina. It was hard to decide between them, but Miss Harwood is just smoking hot and relentless at making Tom please her.

Looks like a field trip coming up. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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