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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 9:00 PM Title: The Wind Up

Chpt 80, the windup

Okay, Lina, I love ya, but you are a total failure as a mother.

No offense.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 9:15 AM Title: The Wind Up

P.S.---recruiting Jessica to spirit Tom away, to her college sorority house, might be one way to give Serena extra-time to come up with a viable plan of "custodial adoption."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 9:13 AM Title: The Wind Up

Well, at least you proved Tom Speedy's prediction to be half-wrong (lol!).

Seriously, though: I like how the Lindholms mother-and-daughter have formed an alliance of convenience. Correctly anticipating that Tess will break her promise to Tom for his own "good." And, I have to admit...

...I'm rooting for Lina and Janine.

Author's Response:

Each is formidible in her own right, together, oho

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 7:29 PM Title: The Wind Up

I never thought that this tale would go on so long! Not that I would ever object. For me, this is the perfect mix... a fascinating story with lots of sexually related activities.

Keep up the good work!

BTW: Is Michael's Story going to be similar in length?



Author's Response:

I'm too am surprised at the following this story has garnered, delightfully so. thanks for the props. As for Michael's Story, I am honestly unsure of how much further to take that story. Unfortunately one of my biggest weaknesses is I write myself into a corner and then loose focus on a story, (as evidenced by a half dozen unfinished sotires I still have.) That said, I still do have a few ideas for Michael yet.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 7:09 PM Title: The Wind Up

First of all, I was so dissapointed that this wasn't a Tom vs Miss Harwood chapter. I mean, you keep teasing me with this stuff. (I bet next chapter is like Katie driving and thinking about Cassidy and her boyfriend. Lol.)

Although I was initially dissapointed, it actually was pretty good overall.

Yay, Francis is going away so now Lina can come out and play!

Love the detail about Lina getting ready for her bath. Just these details show how elegant and worthy of a woman she is.

I also enjoyed how Lina was in charge of this scene and the conversation. She decided on the plan and refuted Janine's plans despite how successful Janine was in the past.

I can't wait for them both to go visit Tom. (I bet Cassidy will feel jealous of Lina's beauty too.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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