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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 8:48 PM Title: Tess

Tess.

Honey.

Thank you.

Ya' know.  Ya' just say fuck it and have a go at Tom.  I really can't judge you.  You've earned it.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 5:32 PM Title: Tess

The dam's cracking now. Tess is about to shrink one or more men, and if the others find out...



Author's Response:

Quite possibly which could lead to whole other story...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 9:35 AM Title: Tess

I don't know. I think Tess is fooling herself. Some people can hang onto a grudge like a pit bull with a T-bone steak!

No letting go, whatsoever.

Author's Response:

True but in the great karmic cycle Tom has been the one living on borrowed time and pulling Tess along in his wake. 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 9:17 AM Title: Tess

It was an interesting surprise Tess tried to imagine how would it be with a tiny person. I am curious if it affects her further behavior in this story :-) The plot is completely unpredictable now. I am curious who is going to get Tom. I would love to see kind of D/s relationship.
Tanks for excellent stories!



Author's Response:

You're welcome. I think there are elements of the d/s beginning to manifest much like we saw ages ago with the dynamic between Tom and Lina. Tess has experienced confusing feelings throughout the story but still sees Tom as her sibling. If she ever begins to objectify him who knows what might happen.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 8:13 PM Title: Tess

Lucky pen tip. (What if a super tiny person was in that tip?) :)

I'm sure Tess would be a fascinating giantess. I just don't think her using Tom as a toy would be right for this story. Tess has to find someone or something new to play with.

Hmm, so Tess and Tom's mom will be showing up, huh. Well, the good news is that I can see a way to get Tom to Miss Harwood. Their mom would be strict about keep Tom with her and soon she will need a private tutor and Miss Harwood would be perfect for Tom. (I hope I'm right.)

Back to back chapters about two teenage girls thinking about Tom and getting horny. Next chapter might be another girl getting horny. Except this time it's probably a woman. (Lina or Cassidy.) a chapter for Lina thinking of Tom would be nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know. Interesting if the cap of the pen dud have someone ultra tiny or ant sized. Probably drown I suppose. We shall see what's next in store for our tiny protagonist suffice to say i know you will approve. Next chapter very soon

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