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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 1:07 AM Title: Janine

Hm, it would be very difficult for Janine to get Tom. Everybody is going to suspect her if Tom disappears. The only chance is to manipulate somehow Tom so that he wants to go to her but I do not think she can succeed.
Therefore I do not think she is going to get him soon. I think important person will be Tom's mother. On one side she looks busy so she cannot take care of him herself. But on the other side she wants the best for her son. So she can give her son to anybody she believes it is the best for her son ;-) E.g. to some teacher (Miss Addison?) so that Tom can continue in his studies. But she also can decide to leave Tom by Cassidy to ensure he gets a medical attention he may need in his condition. I would prefer Cassidy or Lina and if the relationship evolves in D/s direction. 



Author's Response:

I have long maitained never ever count Janine out. Ever. Things are about to heat up soon enough

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2016 9:24 AM Title: Janine

Well, then, either Janine's pituitary system has literally been empowered by her time with Our Little Hero. Or, Duggernaut has simply (GASP!) goofed.

;-D

Author's Response:

Tom's discontent stems from the fact Janine is taller than her mother. Has been from the beginning of the story. It seems thematic that I've typically made children taller than their parental counterparts. I suppose I've modeled it after my own family. Dad 6'3" me 6'5" little brother 6'7". 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 6:56 PM Title: Janine

@TomSpeedy: Janine could be wearing high heels.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 6:55 PM Title: Janine

Yes, Janine, by all means; control your inner volcano. After all, there's nothing worse than premature eruption!

[Oh, come on. You had to know SOMEONE was going to use that joke!]

Seriously, though: Janine maybe underestimating her older sister. If she's anything like the other two Lindholm women, she's probably better at scheming than most non-Lindholms give her credit for. By that I mean, adept at luring others into a false sense of security. Of course, only the next chapter will answer that question, yay or nay. So, I'll see you at chapter 76.*

* "That's the spirit!" ;-)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 5:40 PM Title: Janine

Right now I think Lina's the most likely to win. If Serena does figure out how to give her legal custody of Tom, then I'm not sure what the others can do to fight that. That would also force Tom's mother to become aware of the situation, as she'd have to find out that she no longer has legal custody of her own son.



Author's Response:

So many possibilities...  ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 5:34 PM Title: Janine

I don't know why, but I just don't like how the younger Janine is taller than Jess and Lina. I feel like Lina should be the tallest and Jess should be next. I guess I just like older women to be taller, I guess.

Janine seriously thinks that Tom wants him becuase of that wink? Haha! I bet Tom's wink was more of a "Hey beautiful, remember me? Yeah, enjoy looking at me while you can princess." I'm pretty sure Tom doesn't want to go back with Janine. If she does get her hands on him, I bet Tom will fear for his life.

By healing, does that mean a part 5 of Cassidy vs Tom is coming up? Some healing from the pretty nurse always helps.

I'm really curious about Lina's thoughts on getting Tom back. We got a lot from Cassidy, Janine and Jess, but I want to know about Lina's strategy and how she will play with Tom.

If Tom is just going to stay with Cassidy, maybe a certain teacher can, let's say, pick him up and give him some private lessons. Hehe, since he won't be going to school for sometime. Unless, Cassidy hires some teacher to take Tom to school and that teacher can hide him you know where and give him detention everyday.

Ok, I just can't stop thinking of Miss Harwood. She is bound to make appearance soon, and I just can't help thinking about it.

While we wait for that, I prefect part 5 of fun is coming up next.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We already know Tom is drawn to Janine. In the first chapter he states it's his destiny to wind up in her panties. There is certainly a bond there destructive as it may be. Eben if the wink was intended to tease he was sending her a message. The question is how does Cass feel about it?

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