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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 7:18 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

@TomSpeedy: Only in the strictest masochistic sense, though.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 4:37 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

I think they will not be able to hide it in front of mom. The school will contact her anyway asking why Tom is not in the school - especially Miss Addison who knows about Tom may try to revenge and contact Tom's mom asking why he is not in the school ;-)

Janine was always the most creative to get Tom. So I am curious what is her cunning plan to relief her 'physical ache of want between her thighs' :-)

Btw: it is admirable performance from you to be able to write two excellent stories in parallel. Thanks.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 10:49 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

I might have guessed this, in an earlier review. But, I think Janine will try to bribe Cassidy into coming to work for her...as Tom's "private" nurse. As for Mrs. Wentworth's alleged over-protectiveness? Tom might not be exaggerating, all that much. When it comes to injured only sons, some mothers can over-compensate faster than Donald Trump can say "George W. Bush _bought_ his first term as President!"

By the same token, Tess might not be exaggerating, either, when she claims that Mrs. Wentworth might make her the scapegoat. Indeed, Tess seems to be thinking like her mother, already! What with her half-serious consideration of betraying her brother's blind faith in her for his own "good." *

*I won't say "trust" as way too many people mistakenly think those two words are synonymous. Whereas, in truth, "faith" is what's offered automatically, if not unconditionally. While trust, like respect, has to be _earned_ before it's given.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 10:06 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

That makes sense, though the way he was refusing to let his mother know made it seem like he didn't like her, but i'm guessing that's not the case, he just wants his freedom.

Anyway, i do hope Tess tells their mother, especially since people are already planning on taking him away and they probably will need her help and i get the feeling their mother can come up with a better cover story for Tom's "absence".

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 1:46 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

Tom not wanting his mother to find out is starting to seem illogical at this point, especially since he probably would be safer then her. 

 

Plus their mother is a scientist, for all he knows she could probably find a way to reverse his condition if he knew.



Author's Response:

There is presumably no safer place for Tom. Tess knows it Cassidy knows it and even Tom knows it. But Tom also knows if he is with her all of the adventures he has been having will be at an end which is why he is protesting so strongly against it. Despite some of what hes been through he still wamts to play while waiting to get restored. Tom's mother is an Italian fashion model and his father is a businessman.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 7:19 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

Does this mean that Janine is going to bribe Cassidy for Tom?

I just can't see Cassidy giving Tom away like that. Cassidy is even jealous and taking money from her makes Cassidy look even worse. I don't think it will work out.

Yes, please don't tell their mother. The story is already so complicated.

Enough discussions and lets get to part 5. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  1. Janine wants Tom and she is exploring ways to make it happen. Can Cass be bribed?  Not sure. If Tom is still with Cassidy in the next few chapters there may yet be a part 5

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 5:28 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

Man! I just loved chapter 71, how Cassidy was on control of Tom and use him in a dominant but gentle way and Tom like it, like he was born to be her sex toy for all life, seriously Cassidy deserve to have Tom only for herself for now on, hope Tom stay for like a month or two "or even more time" in Cassidy's apartament so they can have fun all day like in the chapter 71 or chapter 65 when she shove him all the way in her vagina, I just hope Janine don't steal Tom from Cassidy, is not that I don't like Janine...but it's just that Tom and Cassidy are the best combination in my opinion ^^



Author's Response:

The consensus session to suggest Cassidy is the best fit for Tom but there are still others with am interest in having him. Should be interesting when things start heating up

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