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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 8:45 PM Title: Tess and Janine

Oh for god's sake!  Tom, you little dumbass!  Cassiy is right there!  She's fun, she's hot, she's got that nurse thing (okay, I don't really get the nurse thing) and she's looking out for you. 

And the minute she turns up your mind goes to the blonde troll.  God.  Dumbass.

Here's your very own meme.

Pussy.

Picture of Tom.

Makes you stupid.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 6:37 PM Title: Tess and Janine

Author's Response:

I was thinking as Tom as a little pain in the ass.

Janine didn't seem to think so.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 11:52 PM Title: Tess and Janine

I actually do hope his mom finds him like this. It's about time she found out what happened to Tom.



Author's Response:

Could prove very interesting. We will see how this plays out.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 9:53 PM Title: Tess and Janine

Hmmmmmm! I wonder if this means Jessica's college sorority is going to get temporary custody of Little Tom?

Author's Response:

That could potentially prove fatal but in all the right ways especially if Janine’s description of her sister is accurate. Time will tell. Or ne I guess.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 8:39 PM Title: Tess and Janine

Darn, I was hoping all this sexy stuff would make you forget about their mom coming over. I just find her visit completely unnecessary and I have no idea where it will be going.


Tom is just aroused by the presence of all these young females. I bet that's why he is in a jolly mood.

Well, I hope Cassidy gets to keep Tom still, they make a great team.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Imagine yourself in Tom's place. Bet your smile would be from ear to ear. I'm glad you can't see where this is going means it will be fresh for you. Let us not forget about Cassidy's friend Selina. Wait have I introduced that character yet? Maybe. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 6:28 PM Title: Tess and Janine

Now there's the Janine we know and love! Unapologetic, scheming and self centered to the nth degree! Anyway, in my opinion Cassidy is the best girl for Tom's sake, she's gentle, sexy, but most importantly she's a nurse who can get him back in good health if something happens to him. From both a logical and relationship perspective, Cassidy is the best fit for Tom. But as things stand, I doubt it's gonna last much longer.



Author's Response:

Muwahaha we know what Janine is capable of while others might be fooled by her turning over a new leaf. Cassidy does seem very compatible with Tom but does she have the wherewithal to combat Janine? Time will tell.

Reviewer: Beardless Bard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 6:02 PM Title: Tess and Janine

Another great addition. I love how the story feels like it is building towards something. The lawyer seems pretty important, and I want to see where this takes us! I look everyday to see if you update!

 

Quick question about your other stories. Which are actively being updated and which are finished or dropped?

 

This time of year is quite crazy for my profession, so I don't know if I'll be updating anytime soon! Probably should have waited before posting the start to my story!



Author's Response:

Thanks beardless bard. I hope that I'm building toward another large event though what is still nebulous in my mind. Any story I've not identified as complete might still be added to though I cannot say with any degree of certainty. I still hope to add to each of them. Because of my two jobs and school my time has become very limited I am focusing my energies on Tom and Michael with peripheral attention to nefarious and Daffyd. I really want to get back into Mo's Story as well. Thanks for the inquiry and your own story. :)

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