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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 9:51 PM Title: Janine and Serena

A lady lawyer, now???!

God help Tom.

Author's Response:

Even God might not want to meddle with that

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 4:25 PM Title: Janine and Serena

What's with all these curious people all of a sudden? Jessica and Serena are acting like the same person.

Serena reminds me of the mermaid from some movie I watched. That's all I think of when I read the name.

So Lina asked Serena for a personal request to go after Cassidy? I'm not too familiar with how the law works but I don't think there is any need for all tie since Cassidy seems like a nice person willing to hand Tom over.

Since Serena likes to keep things confidential, then perhaps Janine should tell her about Tom. That way another hot woman can have fun with Tom. I'm sure Janine doesn't want to involve Tom becuase she wants him all to herself.

Interesting chapter, but I still wonder about the introduction of more characters. Nonetheless, Serena seems awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Might just be some window dressing to keep you guessing, or it might play a significant role in the immediate future, not sure yet, haven't figured out what I want to do with them yet...

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