[Report This]Date: March 23 2017 1:37 AM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Pussy/boob action is amazing.
Still love every chapter and I always look forward to reading more of this amazinc story.
Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the props!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2016 4:04 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
I saw you post Nefarious Nine and I assumed that that was the only story you uploaded yesterday. Turns out all 4 were uploaded. Now I'm late to the party.
I'm still not exactly sure what happened during this chapter that we already didn't know.
A few chapters back, Lina asked for Cassidy's personal information. It's no surprise that Lina has it. I'm just surprised that that was the cliffhanger of the chapter. Is it a cliffhanger? I thought we already knew that.
What good does Cassidy's Lane's info do for Lina? Cassidy is nice enough that she can return Tom. Even Tess knows Cassidy's adress which means she is open to let them see Tom. I'm sure if Lina just wants Tom, she could just ask.
Also, we know Jess is curious about Tom. Lina just gave her more reasons to want Tom. Mostly sexual reasons and she talks like some prophecy witch. Inner goddess? I did not expect Lina to say all this stuff. I was expecting more like "Tom made me fall in love again ever since I set my eyes on Francis" or something touching like that.
The spiritual talk isn't really the best idea to convince a college aged daughter about something.
Yeah, it looks like Jess will have some time with Tom. I doubt he will be taken with her to college. Tom belongs in this town with Tess, Janine, and Lina.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Tom, I got called away after the Nefarious 9 post and couldnt get back til later. This chapter was about tying up some ends and presenting Tom in a new light as the catalyst for awakening desire, hunger, power, etc. Jess is certainly getting the urge to find out for herself what all the fuss is about. It has yet to written, but it will unfold as it is meant to...
[Report This]Date: February 04 2016 12:43 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Hoo-boy! Over-cliched or not,Tom may wind up meeting Jessica's sorortiy sisters, yet! :-(
Author's Response:
A forest fire can start with a single match match...
Date: February 03 2016 10:32 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Yikes, Lina isn't as pacifist as I once thought, my impression of her has changed a lot with this chapter, I can kind of see where Janine gets it from, although I doubt she's as heartless as her daughter...
Author's Response:
Lina is definitely capable, but bound by a morality and scruples Janine has yet to develop. What might she have been like at eighteen?
[Report This]Date: February 03 2016 10:00 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Ok, that whole conversation had me cringing, I mean, I'm not a mother and don't have a daughter but that seemed just a little too cavalier. But, then again, the Lindholm family isn't a normal family. ;)
I like how curious Jessica is getting, wonder what her inner Goddess is!
Clever of Lina explaining the problems that Tess will encounter trying to house her brother but one thing she doesn't know about is the grandfather and the possibility of Tom being regrown. What lengths will Lina go to then if she learns of that possibility. She's developed quite an obsession with little Tom.
Author's Response:
The Lindholm's are certainly not your average run of the mill bunch. If Lina finds out there may be a possibility of restoration for Tom, will she become more aggressive in her desire? We shall see...