[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 6:39 PM Title: Tess
Who knows Tess? If it's "new and novel" enough, maybe even your brother's speedy namesake will love it! ;-)
Date: January 30 2016 6:36 PM Title: Tess
Duggernaut, forgot to comment on your post about getting too involved. Its not. I like how you keep us guessing, never knowing if a character you introduce will play a big part or just misdirection.
And its always curious to see what kind of Giantess they will be, like Jessica, most interested in her ;)
Really, the only 2 people to have Tom so far has been Lina and Janine. Sam played with him once, Addison had him briefly and now Cassidy. Doesnt seem to involved to me. I think the two main antagonists will continue to be Lina and Janine with 2 wild cards, Sam and Jessica, whom may surprise us. I don't think Cassidy is going to have an ongoing part in the story, just a hunch.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input Maximus. My only intent is to try and keep this story engaging enough that readers enjoys reading it. i know in another of my stories, it exploded with characters and got all hazy and difficult to write.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 5:14 PM Title: Tess
Wow, another update!
Since Tess already has the address and knows that Cassidy is a good person, why is Lina still doing this detective work? Is she doing something that is irrelevant to Cassidy or what? I'm curious about her intentions.
Why did Tess frown when she saw Cassidy? So what if she's beautiful? I don't get why it made her frown.
Tom said that some of his bruises were from Janine. Where did the other bruises come from? Miss Addison, the accident? I'm curious about that as well.
I'm pretty sure Tom wants to stay with Cassidy becuase she seems gentle like Lina, and as a bonus, there is no threat like Janine nearby.
Jessica really wants to see Tom. She's the only women who hasn't seen Tom yet. (Funny, how no men in this story saw Tom yet. I'd like to keep it this way.)
Will Cassidy be next on the Tom's to do list? Will Tom be Cassidy's next patient? Seems like we will find out soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 1:35 PM Title: Tess
Really love how you wrote the parts with Cassidy, adds a touch of realism to the story. Now you can get into how things unfold with Tom and Cassidy in a realistic manner after putting Toms family at ease. What that entails is anyones guess but looking forward to it!
Although, not sure how long he will be with Cassidy, looks like Lina is planning a little kidnapping of her own, ha, little, get it get it.
And Jessica wants in on it now too! Find out what kind of giantess she is, quite the family they are :)