Chapter 57 Jess.

Yes, Tess, honey: everyone is crazy but you.

First of all, this is the funniest chapter in the entire story. I kept smiling and laughing, then smiling again until it hurt a bit. The secret is out, everyone knows about Tom and it's hilarious watching this all enfold.

Second, I'm kinda surprised that you brought Jess back in, but I should've know that whenever you mention a character, they become a key role in a story later on. Still waiting in Miss Harwood to show up. :)

Janine doesn't even seem to regret anything as Tess told the story. I would love to hear the uncensored version that Janine has experienced with Tom. That should get some great reactions from Jess.

Jessica is now Jess. Now that's gonna confuse me soon since Tess is already a common name in this story. I wonder if Jess will now get some time with Tom since she now knows about him.

I admire how this chapter was setup. The way Jess was trying to put the pieces together takes skill becuase you have to exclude stuff that the rest of the characters already know.

Man, Lina felt embarrassed the whole time. It's like Jess had respect for her and then it just dropped as soon as Jess found out that Lina had sex with Tess's brother. Also, Lina's explanation was awesome. "It's Tom, there's se thing special about him" as if she recommends Jess to have a go with Tom to figure it out herself.

This chapter also felt like a showdown. Everyone is on the same page and everyone knows what each person did with Tom. I wish each lady shares their story of what they did with Tom. Sexy story time!

I really, really like this chapter. Even though, there was no sexual fun, this chapter was fun to read.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wonder if Selene would make a good first name for Miss Harwood? Hmm...