Date: March 09 2017 10:19 PM Title: 911
Chapter 53, 911
Okay, car accident got my hopes up, but the bitch skates again. I dunno, a nice facial scar might add character...maybe some missing limbs.
WTF happened to Tom...probably some sexy nurse or doctor has him in heaven right now.
Poor Tess...
Date: January 08 2016 8:54 AM Title: 911
I think that no one knows where tom is
please more
Author's Response:
;)
Date: January 08 2016 7:49 AM Title: 911
If it turns out he _was_ found by a nurse, let us not forget who was the _very first_ to make that guess. back in the reviews of chapter 51? ;-)
Author's Response:
Duly noted.
Date: January 07 2016 10:31 PM Title: 911
I think Tom must be in Janine's vagina.
Author's Response:
Very Clever thought considering the narrative was directly everyone to think externally. I'm not saying that's where he is or isn't, but I do appreciate the the ingenuity of the thinking, ;)
[Report This]Date: January 07 2016 9:16 PM Title: 911
I don't think Jessica has Tom, becuase that seems way too predictable. The fact that she was with Janine when she woke up, and also goes to the restroom before meeting with Dad.
Then again, she just nonchalantly says Tom as if she doesn't have him. However, when Lina told her that Tom is a boy from school, I bet Jessica connected the dots and went to the restroom with an unknown little boy she found. Despite all these clues, Duggernaut likes surprises and I think he wants us to pick Jessica.
When Lina showed up, I was going to claim it was her, but then she started thinking about Tom's whereabouts and that eliminated her from these choices.
My guess would be some nurse who put the catheter inside Janine. She probably put it inside and felt something tug it, therefore finding Tom.
I don't think Tom is dying by the car remains. That would seem unlikely and the main characters would probably not find him.
I almost forgot, but where did Jessica come from? I thought Janine was an only child but you actually did a great job hiding her. I wouldn't mind Jessica taking Tom, but I still prefer Lina above all.
Now Tess is coming too? It's going to be a mass character party soon. Every single person will be at this hospital and it feels like something big is about to happen.
I might do a later review becuase there is much to speculate. Either way, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I know you are a big Lina fan, and yes everyone who knows seems to be gathering to try and find our wayward little protagonist before something awful happens. Funny, no one yet has suggested he might snuck out of Janine's bed on his own and is hiding in the room somewhere, could be, secretly spying on all the Lindholm women all at once. Tom is a sneaky little rascal after all, :)
Date: January 07 2016 8:49 PM Title: 911
Tom has been getting tossed around like a rag doll in this story hasn't he? I'm wondering if it's possible a nurse found him in Janine's panties or something and snatched him away. I guess the posibilities of where he could be at this point are limitless! But I hope this guy catches a break, really ANYONE that he ends up with who's a semi-decent person will be better than Janine. Despite being a beauty and all, she treated him horribly (probably the worse of anyone so far), of that theres no arguing...
Author's Response:
Tom has been the author of a fair portion of his misfortune, getting in over his head, literally and proverbially. We shall see what direction his fortunes take very shortly. Janine is a force of nature, much like a cyclone, awe inspiring to look at, but suck the wind right out of your lungs if you get too close!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2016 8:16 PM Title: 911
Hmm, was hoping there was no accident even know I knew there would be. Its always sad when Janine loses control of Tom :)
I was going to suspect a nurse may have Tom, and perhaps one does but not sure if you can keep introducing new people who want nothing more to kidnap Tom for themselves.
Likewise, dont think Jessica has him or if she does, I dont see you having her whisking him away to her dorm, to close to Michaels story being passed around as a plaything. Of course, would not complain, can never have too much of that!
So perhaps Tom is still in the car? Dangerous predicament if true.
Eagerly await the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, you've made no secret you are in Janine's corner as she methodically goes after and gets what she wants. There are parallels between the two stories for sure, however the sibling relationship is WAY different. Tom has an ally, Michael, well, hmm, hopefully he has a happy place...
[Report This]Date: January 07 2016 7:34 PM Title: 911
Whoa! I'm 301st? Yay me!!
Seriously, though : This was a suitably dramatic cliff-hanger, in so many ways. Especially the plot twist of introducing a college-age older sister for Janine! This raises the possibility of Jessica finding Tom before anyone else. And, perhaps, keeping that discovery to herself until she gets back to her college with him!
Of course, I realize that high school-age shrunken man winding up with a nymphomaniacal sorority is kind of an over-used cliche' on this website. But, given your positive track record, so far, I've no doubt you'll be able to put a unique spin on such a gimmick.
I eagerly await the next chapter, as I get my booster shot of anti-Tomspeedyitis vaccine. ;-D
Author's Response:
Sooo many different options avaiable to try and redirect this story. I do think the sorority might be a little too cliche, but another beautiful woman can help get people looking in other places, maybe, or maybe not.