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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 9:26 PM Title: Tess

Haha, thats harsh after the cliff hanger you left us with :)

 

I understand why though and am most curious about Harrison, something doesn't sit right with him.

 

Seems Miss Addison will throw a wrench in Janines well laid plans. Crossing Janine does not seem like a good career move.

 

Speaking of Janine, hope she is as adept at driving that sports car as she is cunning.



Author's Response:

That's why I apologized in the preface. Bad career move? Bad all the way around to cross that girl. There will be more from Harrison but not for a few chapters. Next chapter will be a Janine chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 11:42 AM Title: Tess

Postscript: I'm not disappointed with the non-gts interlude. It merely (but delightfully) heightens the suspense!

Welcome home, btw. :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the reception and the feedback. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 11:40 AM Title: Tess

It would seem Miss Addison is about to employ that old battlefield adage: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend."


[Contrary to popular belief, that phrase was NOT coined by the writers of "Aliens vs. Predator!"]

Author's Response:

Kautilya

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2016 11:55 PM Title: Tess

First of all, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. It's feels good to say that again. Long time since you last posted.

Second, that authors note made me laugh. Not becuase I expected something like this to happen this chapter but becuase even you yourself knew that people might be dissapointed with this chapter.

Ok, this chapter wasn't that bad becuase the entry of Miss Addison definately makes it a worthwhile cliffhanger. Other than that, when I saw the paragraph title of Tess, I admit I was hoping for some hospital action instead. (Unless they didn't crash. Ugh! Ur cliffhangers are just too good!)

Man, Miss Addison feels so 2015, like that was a while ago since we saw her. I bet she is just going to flat out tell Tess that Janine has Tom. I don't think Miss Addison is like the other women who are curious about how Tom shrank and all that. I think Miss Addison learned her lesson of stealing Tom and may even apololigize for it.

I think this whole "search for the cure/grandpa" thing is getting pointless, becuase I don't see where it can go after this. It might be better to just accept the fact that Tom is shrunk and what's done is done. That way, the giantess stuff can keep on rolling.

While part of me wants to know why Miss Addison is visiting Tess, I still prefer reading about Janine driving over 100 mph in her sports car with Tom igniting her from the inside of her underwear.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom yeah I figured after the break of a couple weeks people would want to know about Janine but I needed to establish interaction between miss Addison and Tess for the chapter that will follow this one. Probably in another day or two.l then we see what if anything happened to Janine. Harrison Kinsley's name appears in another story of mine, but we'll get back to that later. Cheers

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