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Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 3:13 PM Title: That Awkward Father Daughter Conversation

Hmmm, if they crash this might be the best chance Tom has to get away. This opens up a world of possibilities, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

It certainly does allow for a multitude of possibilites, who knows? 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2015 7:36 AM Title: That Awkward Father Daughter Conversation

Will Janine have an accident? Will Tom be miraculously thrown clear? Or will they both wind up in the hospital? With Tom being confiscated by some sex-starved nurse? Or, even worse (for certain other readers): will he be found among Janine's personal effects by the Lindholm's housekeeper?

All these questions (among others) to be answered, by the author, after the start of the New Year. Until then?

Merry Xmas to all, and to all a good day. :-)

Author's Response:

Hey Carycomic, there exists a plethora of possible directions to take this story, and you are absolutely right, there does seem to be a dividing liune for those who have invested in this tale, should be interesting. Happy holidays!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2015 9:42 PM Title: That Awkward Father Daughter Conversation

Haha, this conversation is only awkward with Janine using all these giantess references.

"Guys ur age wanna get in ur pants". Janine must have been laughing inside her head.

I don't think this loss of control will make her crash. Nah, I think it's just a scare.

Or.... Janine gets injured, goes to the hospital. Nurses then strip her clothes and when an X-ray goes thru, they find Tom. That would be interesting to see. Janine probably wakes up thinking about Tom instead of her own well being. Lol.

Or...Janine gets injured. Lina gets a call to arrive at the hospital, then when the nurses leave, Lina sticks her hand in the unconscious Janine and finds Tom.

So many possibilities!

This cliffhanger seems like it can go in multiple directions. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

So many possible things could happen. What if they don't crash? What if they do and there is a female paramedic, so many ways to go...

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