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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 10:45 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

This chapter was weird, like the writing style changed a bit and I thought someone else wrote it. Either way, I liked it.

I like how you took it slow this chapter and made Tom just think for a second. Usually I'm all in favor of nonstop action, but his thoughts about his position and escape bring up many more possibilities for the future which I always enjoy.

When he describes being trapped in Jane's panty drawer, I thought it was cool that he remembered that it was her that made him began this journey.

I also liked his analysis of each giantess. Janine and Sam want to cruelly play with him, Lina, gently play, but Tess just wanted to keep him safe. I admire that way of Tom thinking so much that it feels almost unlike me. I like how he said that he couldn't trust Lina because she had her own agenda. It made me wonder if Lina is going to keep Tom with her at all costs and might even be 'controlling' like her daughter so she can keep Tom. Everyone getting naughty and dark. I like it.

I think Janine is jealous of Tess's beauty. Think about it. Tom is fancied by girls and women, and Tess has had her own marvelous looks. It must be the genes and Janine wants Tom not just for herself, but probably to make Tess feel bad too.

Always lacy panties, haha.

I don't think calling out for Francis would help. Janine would be like "this kid fucked your wife, so I'm punishing him". Then Francis might even agree or suggest some cruel torture methods. Tom should only call out for Lina or Tess.

Sure we know Janine is a genius. Lina is smart, as well as Tess. Tess is not an idiot and so is Tom. That's right, they are all freaking smart and outplaying each other. My point is that Tom is probably faking all this to make Janine concerned for him. He is probably a gymnast or contortionist of some sort. Nonetheless, I think this is a all an act created from Tom's brilliancy. This is the plan to escape, now it's time to execute it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 9:43 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

Oh well, if anything is broken, just duct tape it and and shove him down her panties so she can get on with her plan ;)

 

I like how such a simple act of pressing her hand down him could have such a devastating effect when all she was trying to do was imobilize him. Wonder if that will make her feel bad or awaken even something darker in her. My money is on the later.

 

Also wonder if you plan on anything sinister between Sam and Tom, little forshadowing there maybe? Would be an interesting twist, everyone thinking Janine is the threat but turns out Sam is the wolf in sheeps clothing.

 

Great work!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 8:20 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

Uh-oh! Tom ist kaput? :-(


*Insert "Taps" recording, here.*

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 7:15 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

So did she kill him? I don't think so or this story would end here, but if she hurt him badly maybe she'll treat him a little better from now on? Ah who am I kidding, I doubt Janine is gonna have any character development, she's too spoiled and seems to care so little about anyone else. More likely, she'll just toss him into a trash can and get on with her day. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, it looks like this story just got a little more interesting! I was getting tired of the "pass the dildo boy to the next girl" scenario you had going on, so I'm glad for a bit of a mixup!

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