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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2019 10:37 PM Title: Lina

Aww I wonder if or how Tess is going to figure out that Janine has Tom now? :/

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2015 9:04 PM Title: Lina

I have found this story to be quite fascinating, and looking forward to seeing how much longer Tom will have to survive before he can resume his normal size (if ever). And how many additional more female bodies he will have to endure, and to what degree.

Thanks, and keep it rolling!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review this story. Tom is atypical of my usual protagonists and for whatever reason this story is the one that's gotten the most interest. There are undoubted parallels between this story and another I'm working on at the moment called Michael's Story. Given recent developments in this tale things ahead for Tom go from him having fun with his tiny status to him just trying to survive. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 7:26 PM Title: Lina

Friday night with Janine Lindholm?! That's bound to remove the first two initials from TGIF.

Author's Response:

That Girl Is Frightening - TGIF. Gives a whole new meaning to long weekend.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 6:53 PM Title: Lina

Wow, just reading the thoughts of Lina gets me interested in this again. I really enjoy reading about her desires, especially her naughty thoughts about Tom. I'm glad she even thinks about him while she is with Francis.

Clever move by having Janine say that mom was feeling depressed and needed company. This also means that if Lina refused, then Francis will be more inclined to help. Clever girl Janine.

Tess is now 2 steps behind. She is not prepping a plan to get her brother, but she is still figuring out if Miss Addison even took Tom. Janine surely has brought time on her hands. She might even thank Miss Addision for being an obstacle to Tess.

I'm so glad you brought up Miss Harwood. If I know you, whenever you mention the name of a character, they are going to play a role later on. I hope this one becomes true! I want Tom in Miss Harwood's possession and for her to play with him in ways that will make every woman in this story jealous. (Same goes with Lina. I want these women to play with Tom like that.)

Man, Francis seems like he will be staying for a while. This doesn't mean that Linda won't see Tom, it just means that it will be challenging and who doesn't like a challenge? I bet Lina embraces them like her daughter.

I really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad to have recaptured your interest it does seem Tess is lagging somewhat. Janine is diabolical in her efforts setting mom up was fairly easy. Things look decidedly bleak for our protagonist 

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