[Report This]Date: February 09 2019 12:36 AM Title: Alpha
1.) Janine is truly an evil genius
2.) Tom is so fucked…
[Report This]Date: March 09 2017 9:52 PM Title: Alpha
See, SW fans agree. "Evil Cunt."
I gotta say, as much as I hate her, Janine's plan was brilliant. She seems to have a firm grasp of "the system."
If she could turn that insight on herself she'd probaly shudder.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2015 2:16 PM Title: Alpha
Back where he belongs! She is a cunning little minx, phew, now Toms in trouble, he may never get out of her panties again. Of course, he may actually iike that unless he finds himself a little further south *weg*
Couple of rebuttals to some other reviews. First, not sure how Janine ALWAYS wins, she went 21 chapters without her little prize.
Second, disregard everything wombo said, the characters are great, each with distinctive personalities. And while this story has plenty of eroticism in it, its not an over abundance, its not like every chapter every scene there is sex. I wonder why some of you even come to a fetish site, too many stories around here bore me to tears, you have a great balance in yours, Duggernaught.
Hands down, one of the best contributors here. Stories are well written, have action, twits and turns and you give both gentle and violent fans something to enjoy, very well done.
Author's Response:
I did say have some patience. Thank you for the lofty praise regarding my contributions to this site, and for addressing Giantesslover122's question of why Janine seems to come out on top.
Date: November 17 2015 1:28 PM Title: Alpha
Decent story, this one kind of reminds me of some of wildcatman's works, particularly "The Decrement of Tom", I guess "Tom" being the same name in both stories is just because Tom referes to ThomThumb which is a popular shrunken man character. But anyway you're writing really reminds me of his works, in fact some of the criticisms I have of this story are the SAME I gave to him on many occasions. Namely, that your protagonist feels more like a camera that goes from woman to woman, set-piece to set-piece, rather than an actual character. But then again this story is more towards the side of pure erotica than a story with some sexyness in it, not that this is a bad thing mind you. Anyway, I'll be keeping up with this one, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
ThanK you for the feedback, I appreciate your input and will keep it in mind when continuing this or others stories. :)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 10:34 PM Title: Alpha
@ Giantesslover122
Because "it's her birthday, and she'll win if she wants to. Win if she wants to; win if she wants to! If you were shrunken, too, she'd win over you."
"Doot-doot-doot-doot! DOOT!"
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 7:03 PM Title: Alpha
Why does Janine always have to fucking win?
Author's Response:
Janine is amoral and ruthless which gives her a certain advantage because she is willing to do things that might gives others pause. The story is not done yet. :)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 6:29 PM Title: Alpha
Hey, first of all, glad you are back. I got worried for some time. Nonetheless, you are back.
First of all, I'm not quite sure if that's a showdown. I mean, sure it was two people having a verbal showdown, but I kinda expected it to be bigger. Then again, it would be probably more difficult to have a multi person showdown with multiple women.
Janine said a lot of cruel stuff. Always one step ahead she is. Of her mother, of Tess, and now Miss Addison.
I have no idea about half the things that Janine said, but it sounded scary, the way it sounded official.
So Tom is back with Janine. Miss Addison's adventure with Tom was short timed just like Tess and Sam.
Perhaps this is a good time to catch up on the Lindholm residence. Is the father still there? How long will he be there? Has Lina figured it out? What did Janine say that made Francis arrive? So many questions about that phone call earlier that I want to know!
Then we have Tess. She thinks it's Miss Addison too. Is this going to be a cat and mouse game? Will Tess ask Miss Addison about Tom too. Lol. Miss Addison will be freaked about how many girls know she had Tom.
Last of all, Miss Addison. What will she do? Will she kidnap another boy from school? (Ok, that won't happen, but I had to suggest it.) Will she report Janine of kidnapping? Or even better, will she call Lina? Now that could be interesting.
Next chapter could be anything and I am ready for it. I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom, life sometimes gets in the way of writing and that causes some delay in providing updates. Janine is like Ilsa, She-Wolf of the SS and there was no way Miss Addison was prepared for her. I have moved Tom around a lot and fairly quickly to try and keep it interesting, but he may be in some trouble now she has her talons on him again, we'll see...
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 5:59 PM Title: Alpha
Miss Addison has met her match...and that match will now give Tom an unbearably hot time in the old town, tonight.