[Report This]Date: February 09 2019 12:20 AM Title: All Day Detention
I literally laughed out loud at the “Pandora’s box” joke lmao. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 10 2015 10:53 AM Title: All Day Detention
@ Tom Speedy:
And I predict that the showdown will involve Our Little Hero falling off his "perch" during some bathroom break. Only to be found by Tatiana and/or Astrid!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 9:16 PM Title: All Day Detention
So Mrs Adison huh, did not see that coming. I mean I knew Janine didnt swallow him but dang it, now you got me wanting her to have a snack.
I like how Adison is putting Tom in his place and how you added some descriptions of Toms discomfort. I noted that in the beginning of this story on how its more realistic to show Tom being a little worse for wear after what would be some uncomfortable situations. Good job!
Date: November 09 2015 8:29 PM Title: All Day Detention
Tom or Michael should be tapped to the toilet seat or toilet bowl (just above the water) of the girl's/women's washroom. At school or at home. Best author I've ever read!
Author's Response:
Thaks for the review, we'll see which direction this story takes. As for Michael, he too is in over his head and who knows whether or not he's going to spend some time in the bowl. Thanks for the praise considering there are some wickedly talented authors sharing their tales on the site. Hope you continue to enjoy!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 1:36 PM Title: All Day Detention
This chapter seems like a setup for the next one.
Obviously, you mentioned "Next chapter-Showdown!" So I'm hyped about it.
My prediction: Jane, Tess, Sam, (Lina shows up, or even Miss Harwood shows up) all confront Miss Addison. Janine will feel her up becuase she is that desperate. Miss Addison mentions suspension but Janine brings up some blackmail. Tess is going "wtf no, he's mine". Janine fires back that Tom is her present and then all of a sudden the principal walks in. She orders them all to her office and after a bunch of the principal keeps Tom. Every woman disagrees, but the principal demands that everyone leaves. The principal looks at Tom and talks about how if she was younger, she would love to go out with him. Miss Harwood shows up with some good news for the principal and the principal decides to go out and celebrate tonight. She thanks Miss Harwood and decides to reward her with Tom. Miss Harwood gladly accepts and mixed emotions go through him. (Fear, arousal). Miss Harwood then seduces Tom and gets him to cum. Miss Harwood then asks for him to make her cum and puts him in her panties. Tom reluctantly accepts but claims that it is better than Miss Addison.
That is my version of the showdown.
Hope it happens! I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 1:01 PM Title: All Day Detention
Even more ironic than Tom's unintended pun? "Pandora" translates as "all-gift." So, it could be said that he's trapped in a gift box!*
*Similar to how Janine deliberately misinterpreted his presence, at her birthday party, as wanting to be one of her presents! ;-D