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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2019 11:58 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest

Damnnn… Miss Addison is lowkey a kinky sex freak, and kinda insane, but I love it! lol That first little “lesson” was hot as hell, so I honestly can’t wait to see what she has planned for the next one… ;) 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2017 9:50 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest

Chapter 40 The Enchanted Forest.

Wait, fairy figures...in her sex chamber?  She seems to like Tom's size, but not his charm....hmmm.  Miss Addison is...is...an SW fan.

Oh my god.  You're using this incredible story to make us SW fans look...look... well, pretty damn good compared to Janine. 

Did I get some hint that Tom might be considering Tess' feelings...will wonders never cease.

I find it kind of cute how these women try to humiliate Tom and he just doesn't get it.  He's like "you got the pussy, so I'll do what you want."  Or if denied a choice he just looks at it through the filter of "I liked that" or "I didn't like that"

Great read so far.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 5:35 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest

WHOA!!!! I guess it's true.

"Still waters..." and all that jazz!

Author's Response:

Still waters run, in her case very deep with a turbulent undertow 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 4:58 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest

You know what the weirdest thing about this chapter was? I felt exactly as Tom did.

I didn't want to rub her feet. Not my thing. I agree, I just wanted a crack at her pussy. If he is also thinking what I'm thinking, he knows that if he pleases her good in her pussy, then she might be nice to him.

Then she did use him against her pussy, and like Janine and Sam, she brutally abused him. And what makes this interesting is that these women are taking the thing he loves (pussy) and making it a miserable place for him.

This is good, becuase I don't think Tom even likes Miss Addison, just pleasing women. However, Miss Addison is taking the one thing he likes and making it less enjoyable. After all she is disciplining him.

Next, I like what you did about her pinching Tom's penis. She emphasizes that it's not about him, and it's about her.

It sounds like some sort of giantess sexual slavery. Although it sounds erotic, it seems scary in Tom's case, becuase he has no idea is he will ever be rescued. While in possession of any of the past ladies, he had hope to be moved somewhere else.

Remember when I said I fancy giantess teachers, well, Miss Addison is now kind of a turn off. At first, she sounded exciting, now it seems like just a bad experience in general.

Perhaps, you wanted me to feel unattracted to her, just like how Tom is probably reconsidering his thoughts as well.

I think this is finally the woman that everyone has always wanted. The one who can wipe the smile off Tom's face. I think this is the one. His charms don't work on her, he can't escape on the lid, she brutally abuses him like Janine, he is already bleeding, she won't let him have pleasure. Yep, it's like Tess hired this woman to straighten Tom out. Lol.

Really, good stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know for many readers Miss Addison is not perhaps what they want but I did need a foil. Some have indicated Tom is too comfortable in his situation. First Janine then Lina then Sam now Miss Addison each different. I think you're right that people want him back in Janine’s clutches and all I can say is have patience. I have tried to depict her as unwavering in her resolve to get him as well as demonstrating a very clever mind to achieve this goal. Patience. :)

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