[Report This]Date: February 08 2019 9:59 PM Title: Tom - Thursday
Hmm, I wonder what she has planned for him?… 👀
[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 9:36 PM Title: Tom - Thursday
"Days and weeks to come?" Uh-oh! That's definitely not good! It means she does NOT intend to return him, to Tess, anytime soon.
Or, at least, not until he's been brainwashed worse than the Manchurian Candidate.
Author's Response:
I was thinking maybe a little Clockwork Orange :0
[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 8:00 PM Title: Tom - Thursday
These are my first impressions of the last 2 chapters. I will have a more detailed review later.
No way that Tess and Sam could've figure out that the music got some ones attention and also guessed Miss Addison just like that. Seems very unlikely.
Jane figured it out with Tatiana's help. Now she knows. Is she going to blackmail Miss Addison? Seems like it.
Miss Addison is beyond creepy now. She took him home, and looks like she is about to conduct experiments or some shit. Might even be a dominatrix. She is crazy now.
Miss Harwood seems like a future giantess in this story. Perhaps Tom can get a visit from her? I want them to meet. Miss Addison doesn't seem as sexy as I would've hoped for.
That's all I got for now. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Miss Harwood is exactly what you want her to be achingly hot still young and full of so much knowledge she could share. Whether or not she gets a Crack at Tom remains to be seen. Undecided at this time.