[Report This]Date: February 08 2019 8:52 PM Title: Unexpected Company
Oh my… I think I like where this is going… ;)
Date: November 05 2015 7:35 PM Title: Unexpected Company
Did you just add 2 chapters at once? I'm impressed amongst everything else you managed.
Author's Response:
Yes 2 chapters to try and get to the showdown sooner before I lose reader interest
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 9:23 PM Title: Unexpected Company
@ Tom Speedy: I think Ms. Addison is going to prove the hottest disciplinarian since Tiny Dan's Zavia Tavar Lahrenger.
;-)
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 7:06 PM Title: Unexpected Company
First of all, what just happened?
That was my reaction when Miss Addison decided to show up. I mean, of all people, her? Yes, I have always wanted a teacher to find him, but wow, this is defiantly a surprise.
You said "dragging him down to the office and exposing the situation to the headmistress" twice near the middle of the chapter.
Addison is a great name. Glad you chose it.
I just want everyone to know that Miss Addison is the teacher that scolded Tess and Janine earlier in the story. She is not a random teacher.
I think it's funny how Miss Addison was able to connect the dots and figure out that Tom is a naughty boy.
The vocabulary is strong in Miss Addison. Gives off a nice "well educated" background about her.
Wow, so she just put him in there and trapped him? Im already liking her. I doubt she would pass Lina's sexual demeanor, but let's hope she is in the same league as Ms. Mackenzie!
Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 5:58 PM Title: Unexpected Company
OK! Congratulations; you fooled me. No way I could've anticipated one of his teachers. Let alone, a disciplinarian for whom Tom's imminent lessons in "order" will be as much forbidden pleasure as empowering punishment.