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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2019 8:29 PM Title: Confrontation

Wtf? I wonder where he is? I kinda feel like Janine is still lying, but there’s still a slight possibility that she's telling the truth and someone else took him 🤔

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 8:27 PM Title: Confrontation

Then, it's got to be Astrid.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 6:37 PM Title: Confrontation

Hmmm, not Tanitia you say. Maybe Tomspeedy guessed it, hes up Janines bum, heehee.

It was somedody who scared him, obvious choice is Janine but I think you are going to make us wait a little longer for Janine. Tell you this, if its not Janine, I think Tom is in even more danger than if it was.



Author's Response:

Another possibility no one has really thrown out there is maybe Janine swallowed him... :O

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 2:08 PM Title: Confrontation

Haha, Tess checked Janine pretty good, but not good enough. If we know Janine, he is probably in the back of her underwear, inside her vagina, or even inside her asshole.

I still think it is Janine. She is just straight up lying so the accusations don't go to her. Also, it makes Tess less likely to suspect Janine of taking him.

What ever happened to Tom, we at least know Janine is responsible whether she took him or not. (I'm pretty sure she did.)

This Tatiana thing is just a hoax for us to believe that there are more possibilities. Janine's plan is too clever. She went in, got Tom, got Titiana to get her access, and now Tom is hidden.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Muwahaha I know you cant wait, next chapter will answer what happened to Tom, 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 7:56 PM Title: Confrontation

Supposition #1: Tatiana, being the daughter of a Russian Mob boss, would probably have access to all sorts of ex-KGB surveillance experts. And, if she was secretly obsessed with him even before he shrank, she might've had those same experts bug his family's home! Hence, she wouldn't have had to accidentally find him on the bathroom floor (or overhear him and Sam through an overly convenient air duct) to know of his new existence.

Supposition #2: Lina has sent Marta to bring him back to her. But, the latter will wind up double-crossing the former.

Sorry for the relapse into Tomspeedyitis.

Author's Response:

Attempting to extrapoloate potential avenues of the story are good, it helps me understand how well I'm leading the people reading or in some cases it allows me to see alternative possibilities I had not previously considered. However, nope to both, :P

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 7:15 PM Title: Confrontation

Plot twists be like...



Author's Response:

Keep you guessing.

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 6:57 PM Title: Confrontation

Still going strong with this story mate! Very good, and an ominous mysterious twist which will probably get resolved in the following chapter writen in Tom's pov. Unless his abductor's wearing a mask or acts 'off screen' with him for a bit before the identity is revealed : d

 

Quite a mystery as to who could've found Tom and abudcted him like that. Were there any hints in earlier chapters to who this character might be and if they know about Tom?
^_^; 



Author's Response:

Hmm, no overt clues per se. Here's my guess, - Colonel Mustard, in the library, with the candlesitck, joking! Next chapter will be the reveal, I promise

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 6:12 PM Title: Confrontation

SO it HAS to be an Ex-Girlfriend or something!



Author's Response:

Or something, :D

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