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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2019 8:14 PM Title: Ground Rules

Goddamnit! This is bad… This is really bad… O_O

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 5:29 PM Title: Ground Rules

Couldn't be Janine; too soon and too obvious.

Author's Response:

That would be too obvious - which would make it unexpected!

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 3:14 PM Title: Ground Rules

Very good!!!

Continues...



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: I for incredible Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2015 9:54 AM Title: Ground Rules

Oh oh! Janine is trouble indeed. Will Tess be able to save him???



Author's Response:

Only time will tell, and yes Janine is trouble with a capital T

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 8:33 PM Title: Ground Rules

Just getting caught up on this, lots of good things happening! First off, loved the scene between Sam and Tom, one of my favorite scenarios is when the giantess gets lost in her passions with no regard for the tiny, steamy stuff! One of the best stories ever was the Plague with an epic scene where a tiny is found in the girls locker room where he is whisked away to the giantesses home where he perishes in the throws of passion. Obviously you couldnt go that far with Tom or no more story, lol but good job none the less!

 

Next Janine is a devilishly clever, Professor Moriarty inteligence indeed! Im not entirely sure who opened the box though, for some reason I am thinking Tanitia, could she have been in the bathroom and overheard Tess's conversation with Tom? But then why would Tom be afraid of her, he usually looks forward to new encounters? Maybe just something about her expression that sent chills down his spine, sometimes you just know you are in danger. Cant wait to find out if its Janine or someone eise!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, i know you're pulling strongly for the Janine angle to teach Tom a little humility. As for Tatiana, nope. Next chapter will answer the question of who opened the box! :)

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 3:27 PM Title: Ground Rules

You HAVE to implent that hot candle wax torture you implied in one of the earlier chapters pleaseeee. Tom needs some serious punishment for "leaving" his handsome Goddess. ;)



Author's Response:

Lol, Tom is definitely going to experience some new things very very shortly, :)

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 3:25 PM Title: Ground Rules

Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Janine <33 Trouble <333

Got the biggest boner already lmao

 



Author's Response:

Lol, time to set the night afire, :)

Reviewer: takuoni Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 5:23 AM Title: Ground Rules

Pls tell me it's a plot twist and it won't be Janine :D



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 2:17 PM Title: Ground Rules

Ok, now this is funny. I was expecting this long term situation with Sam and Tess, especially when they lay down the ground rules like the group meeting just started.

However, Janine just shows up and takes him. I mean, already?!!! Ha, I didn't expect it to be that fast but alright, Janine has always been sexier than both Sam and Tess and if being with Janine means a chance to get to Lina, then I'm all for it.

Good point about Tom's fears of Sam and how her sexual attitude reminded him of Janine. Initially, that was the effect I wanted Lina to give Tom, but I guess Tom saw her approach as gentle. First thing Sam did was insert him inside her. Definatley sounds like Janine, so it makes sense.

At the end, you might as well should've wrote Janine. I mean, who else would it be that gives him "a whole world of trouble". Yep. That's Janine. Then again, the use of pronouns does give a little more of a suspense feeling.

The most interesting part of this chapter is that these "ground rules" don't want Tom to wander around. When Tom is found to be absent, Tess and Sam will immediately think he wandered off. Janine couldn't have found a better opportunity. It was as if she was listening to the conversation earlier. Tess and Sam won't even think that Janine took Tom and they won't even look for him there, therefore eliminating them interferring with Tom's situation.

Janine had such a struggle getting Tom from Lina but an easy time getting him from Tess and Sam. This tells me how smart the Lindholm family is and how sophisticated they are at being creative.
Boy, how will Tom escape from these two ever again. Cleverness chart: Janine>Lina>Tom>Sam>Tess. Dont get me wrong. Tess is clever, but I feel like everyone has used Tess or done something behind her back. Janine used Tess to get Tom, Lina used Tess to hide Tom, Tom used Tess to get to Janine, and Sam used Tess to get Tom. Poor Tess. She's going to explode in rage when she comes back to her room.

Now, we look on ahead and wonder what in the world Janine has in store for Tom. First off, she told him that she wanted him in the ass. Feels like that's going to be a gauruntee now. Secondly, Janine never wants Tom to escape this time, so her prison choice for Tom may not be a simple glass this time.

Things have changed drastically, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Next chapter, MIND BENDER!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 9:44 AM Title: Ground Rules

Wow, Janine found him quickly! Question is, when will Tom's condition be reversed? If, at all? 



Author's Response:

Janine is like a circling great white shark with the scent of blood in her nostrils, relentless. Time just got away from Tom

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