[Report This]Date: February 08 2019 2:50 PM Title: Sam and Tom
Lmao Tom is lowkey fucking hilarious tbh
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 7:25 PM Title: Sam and Tom
Janines the only one in control of this little bugger, to everyone else he's like 007, charms the shit out of them.
I didnt even realize he was still naked, yeah, should get him some clothes, lol. In other sibling stories, the sexual tension is established early and you understand it to be that way, in this story though, youve creeated a real life rrelationship between sister and brother and it just comes across as weird. I know you had that scene between Tess and Janine but i took that as more sexual tension between the two of them and not Tess and Tom.
Looking forward to Tom meeting Miss Karma!
Author's Response:
I wanted to avoid the typical hot sister stereotype and develop a more true to life and honest dynamic thanks for noticing. Ton is certainly a smooth little operator but he will soon find all of his gifts may be of little use. :)
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 4:12 PM Title: Sam and Tom
For some reason, I didn't like Tom's cocky behaviour with Lina. However, I find it amusing with Sam and Tess. Watching Sam and Tess get all tense makes it more fun to read.
I agree that they need to wipe that smile off Tom's face, but no I actually like that smile. It keeps him going and makes it more entertaining and the punishments he receives more justifiable. Tom is also instigating all the sexy stuff, and we all want to read about that so I think it's best to let Tom keep it up, for now.
Tess was gone for 5 minutes? Wtf was that? Did she just go to the bathroom and found what she needed? Like, the conversation felt so short between Sam and Tom. (Rereading the chapter makes it feel even shorter.)
At least we know that Sam is into some crazy stuff. Man, I wish Lina had those thoughts. I would love to read about Lina's dreams. I thought she was too busy to even think about her love with Tom that her experience with him, wasn't that powerful. It was soothing to Tom, but I felt that she didn't have that same passion as Sam and Janine.
I think the most obvious solution is for Tess to let Sam take hold of Tom. Sam could play with him and even take him to school. Tess is playing the working mom role like she is juggling multiple activities at once. Sam could lighten that load and carry that burden that is Tom.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Remember this is your story and I've got an inclination of where to take this that will bend your mind. ;-)
Date: October 15 2015 4:01 PM Title: Sam and Tom
I'm with Carycomic, that was hilarious!
Author's Response:
Cocky cocky Tom. Pride goeth before the fall
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 12:31 PM Title: Sam and Tom
"Want to see the helicopter?"
Still ROFLMAO.
Author's Response:
;-)