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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2019 9:15 PM Title: Janine

Oh god… I can’t even begin to imagine what devious plan she’s conjuring right now… 😅

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 7:12 PM Title: Janine

Damn!  Saw that coming.

Boy, smart, rich.beautiful, psychopathic...what more could a boy want?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 1:51 PM Title: Janine

OOPS! My bad; that should have read "...he'll come home."

Where's the embarrassment icon when you need it?

Author's Response:

Either works, though obviously not for his little princess, hmm, awkward...

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 11:56 AM Title: Janine

Very good!

Tom could return to his sister, being punished for her and her friend.

Looking forward to continuing.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, somebody's been reading my mind...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 11:17 PM Title: Janine

I hope that phone call doesn't make the person on the other end arrive too quickly. We want more Lina and Tom time.

Janine's getting too impatient. She went into her mother's room, and was searching for Tom. She even went into her mom's bathroom to look for clues. And unfortunately she did. Now she knows.

Well, that's one way to skip a phone call. "Let's make a phone call, call complete." Haha.

Lina needs to fuck the shit out of Tom before Janine gets him. Actually, I think it's better if Janine snatches Tom, uses him, then Lina makes her move and steals Tom back and uses him. We could go back and forth, and possibly have an agreement where they take turns or if Tom misbehaves, he is sent to Janine, and if Tom becomes useful(sexually) he is given back to Lina.

I think a day where Lina goes to work/shopping would be cool. She puts Tom in her panties and orders him to please her, and during the day she goes to various bathrooms to let Tom know of his progress and gives him further instructions.

In response to your response of my review: wow, 10 km! Tom may have second guesses after this jog. I feel like Tom is a little too happy and I thought he would be scared of vaginas by now. Guess not. But I think he should be scared soon, because Karolina might seem sexier if she demands him to please her rather than asking.

The main point we learned is that Lina can't make more excuses, Janine knows, and when Janine knows, things can get ugly.

I still wonder how does a phone call separate Tom and Lina. It's not like 2 people. (Ok it's 2 people.) But not 2 fully sized people. Tom literally lives almost inside Karolina and to me, that's pretty hard to separate. I wonder what Janine is thinking. I can't even predict anything. I don't see a possibility unless Janine calls a doctor to inspect Lina's vagina. (what I'm trying to say is, I got nothing.) Well, I guess it's another time to surprise me.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The big bomb is coming and you'll see why one call changes it all, the chess matcvh continues, you're not going to be happy, at first, but trust me, it'll all come together in the end.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 6:04 PM Title: Janine

Oh Tom, I almost feel sorry for you, almost. Can't wait!

 

I'm wondering though, just how much Tom will still enjoy being in Linas panties after a jog, might not be all he thought it would be ;)



Author's Response:

You would think it might get a little off putting being trapped for a 10k jog, but Tom is a true poon hound, maybe too much...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 4:44 PM Title: Janine

Let me guess: she called Daddy-kins. Which means, he'll come; want to make love to the fully aroused Lina; and Janine will thereby have access to the one set of drawers she couldn't open. ;-)

Author's Response:

When the next installment comes, you're right on the money, daddy. Flush the prey out of the bush and wait. We've already established Janine's capable moriarty like intellect. Clever girl.

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