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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2019 6:58 PM Title: Tom

Fuck yeah! I think Lina’s in for the best run of her life… ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 8:11 PM Title: Tom

Lina is so sexy! I love how she toys with Tom and even mentions taking her back to Janine as punishment.

Lina might use this to her advantage and get what she wants since Tom fears going back to Janine. This was his warning, next time, Lina will punish him sexually, or she will hand him to Janine.

One thing that I wonder is how long until Tom doesn't like insertion. I mean, sure it is fun at first, but what if he's not careful or what if Lina is not careful. She might get carried away as well as Janine. I think Karolina should take more control over this situation and reduce Tom's control.

I think a sexier approach could be Lina "wanting" Tom in her panties, but Tom begins to reconsider his desires. Lina then says its for safety and Tom reluctantly obliges. While I like Janine's "You please me now! No mercy!" I also think Lina's "You must stay in my panties for your own good" is also awesome. Both women are in control but on different levels.

Some boob play with Lina could be nice too. It fits her caring personality. I love what you are doing with the mouth scenes, especially when she "cleans" him up. Overall, the focus on her panties is excellent.

I wonder how this run will turn out. Will it be like for a few minutes just so Lina can prove her point to Janine, or will she go for an hour jog or longer to make Tom suffer. (Well, I don't think Tom will suffer, but he might get a bit irritated, which is good because he should be punished for almost making Lina orgasm in from of her own daughter.) Or is Lina actually jogging to some place where she wants to spend time with Tom.

This ending was open ended, so many possibilities can happen soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lina is the ideal gentle giantess, but still quite capable of exerting control should she need. It was a 10 kilometer jog.

Reviewer: Shrinkstoryfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 6:29 PM Title: Tom

Thank you!!!! Tom is right where he should be while she jogs,,I'm a big fan of the panty entrapment :)  Can't wait for the next update to this story..



Author's Response:

Panty entrapment is awesome :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 4:43 PM Title: Tom

For some reason, this chapter has reminded me of the rock & roll classic, "Insatiable."

;-)

Author's Response:

When you mentioned insatiable my mind went Marilyn Chambers, my bad

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