Date: March 08 2017 6:43 PM Title: Misdirection
So the Janine, Tess, Sam lesbian orgy is off? Damn...I mean "Don't do it Tess, stay away from that toxic bitch."
Ya know, I felt sorry for her when we first saw her, but now I know why Janine was sitting alone. She's really in touch with her inner psycho cunt.
The insertion really works as a metaphor, cuz Tom's really getting to see how ugly she is on the inside.
Tess gave up and left the house a little too easy in my opinion, but what can you do. (besides knife the bitch and check her panties)
Lina is a great character. And it's great to see someone who makes Tom feel good, maybe even enjoy his perdicament.
And Tom...is that responsibility I hear...accepting that he caused his situation. Holy shit...I never would have seen that coming. Now if he could manage to imagine that Tess might be worried and maybe let her know he's still alive...then maybe he start to be less of a little dick.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 6:28 AM Title: Misdirection
Alright! That explanation/coverup was spectacularly clever! :)
Lucky for Tom that Lina's such a quick thinker, otherwise his daft idea to hide and squirm in her panties of all places would have been totally screwed xD
Of course I'm still waiting for Lina to become an impediment to Tom's ambitions, once he finally gets bored of playing around with her and starts missing home etc.
It wouldnt' surprise me if Lina becomes clingy enough to not wanna let Tom go home so easily ^_^;
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read review and praise on how to throw Janine off the trail. I wanted everyone to think oh oh jigs up and pull a quick one. That said the dynamic in the house is about to change.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 1:30 PM Title: Misdirection
Very good!
- Lina could have crushed Tom inadvertently stuck to a folder, it would be funny.
- Tom fainted breathless.
- Tom be fine, and Lina torture him in some way.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the props yeah wouldn't that have put a quick end to the story if Lina had crushed him with her vagina
[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 5:09 AM Title: Misdirection
Another Great chapter!!! I do have to wonder if Lina is going to actually go jogging with Tom in his current position? That would be pretty epic if I do say so myself but how ever this pans out I'm sure you won't disappoint.. You haven't so far :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review I will endeavor to not disappoint; )
[Report This]Date: September 19 2015 7:58 PM Title: Misdirection
Damn it, thought Lina was going to relent. This is where Janine should have been keeping Tom at all times, why the heck did she ever bother putting him in a glass. I almost want Janine to swallow Tom like she thought about for running away on her like this.
Cary, if Tom didnt want to be a present, shouldnt have been in Janines room on her birthday molesting her breast. ;)
Author's Response:
Hang in there don't count Janine out yet she's not one to relent.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2015 4:29 PM Title: Misdirection
@Tom Speedy:
Oh, catfight scenes can be sexy, too! But, even they should be done in moderation...in order to avoid unintended yawns.
Too much of a good thing, and all that jazz.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2015 11:28 AM Title: Misdirection
@TomSpeedy: I thought sure this chapter was going to be ANYTHING but talk.
If you know what I mean. ;-)
Obviously, we were both wrong. Still it's kind of refreshing when both of those clichés can be deftly (I've ALWAYS wanted to use that word!) avoided.
Author's Response:
Very adroit use of deftly nicely done. Glad I was able to provide a fresh infusion to avoid the suspected mother and daughter union.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2015 11:23 AM Title: Misdirection
Maybe Tom wised up, at the last second. Realizing that even Janine isn't that egocentrically short-sighted that she would fail to put 2+2, together.
Author's Response:
Tom is am adolescent boy driven by impulse that circumvents logic and act on his baser instincts
[Report This]Date: September 19 2015 10:44 AM Title: Misdirection
Wow! I just can't believe that happened. I thought this chapter was going to be the "talk" chapter where they discuss who gets Tom and stuff. (I'm glad that didn't happen.
Only a good writer like yourself could pull this off.
I was 100% sure that Janine figured it out, but then you used some sort of misdirection thing that totally made Lina more crafty improving her rep and my approval of her. I didn't like how Lina was always so revealing about her time with Tom and how Janine knew how to keep it a secret like she was the expert. Lina should be the expert. And this just proved it.
Basically Lina just pulled the "you think he's in there? Well, here take a look" move. Lina couldn't tell Janine he want there, she had to show her so she could believe. "Seeing is believing."
I thought for sure Janine knew that her mom had Tom. Well, she thought that if did have Tom, he would be in her panties in front of her crotch. What Janine didn't know is that how deep Tom was in her vagina.
Janine was looking for a bulge, usually something she would see on herself as she would carry Tom in her panties. Lina exploited that thought by proving "hey, he's not in where you think he is". And Janine believed her. We also can't forget that Lina's pussy is probably much bigger than Janine's so it could hide Tom more easily that Janine could.
When Lina said "well you can help me then" and Janine said "help". That's when I bet things were turning around. See, when Janine heard that, she was thinking that her mother wanted help with orgasming with Tom and Janine was thinking "well this is weird." Then Lina exposed her crotch to Janine, making an effort to give Janine as much evidence as she needs to deny that Tom was never inside her. It also erases that deep inhale on the end of the last chapter.
Good move by Lina to use "Janine's school time" to make excuses over what she does while she is gone. Janine can't prove that wrong, she has no idea. Also, she can't deny her mother is beautiful so the workout makes sense.
Thank you Tom for not blowing this shit up. However, he practically blew it and Lina had to save his ass, literally. She just saved him from going back to Janine. I bet that toilet scene at the end is a sign for punishment. After all, he should be after that stunt he just pulled off. I think it's time for Lina to have a little more control over Tom. He wouldn't mind, because it's much better than serving Janine.
Haha, now Janine is playing to lying game to cover her interruption and curiosity. She was wondering about seeing the doctor. I have to give credit to her, the excuse is not bad. Both these women are playing their sneaky sides perfectly and this was a good clash.
Another good move by Karolina was once she figured out that Janine fell for her excuse, she decided to punish Janine with her own excuse. She used her sickness as a means to go outside the house and leave her with some privacy with Tom. Hmm. I would love to see a jogging scene with Lina and Tom. We know it's essential that Lina take Tom with her since Janine is going to search her mother's room.
Ok, so Janine believes that Tom is not on Lina's person. Now she is going to check her mother's room. When she discovers that Tom is not in her room, and not on Lina's person, then Janine probably would stop questioning Lina about Tom. At least for some time. Surely it will give Lina enough time to play with Tom until Janine gets suspicious again.
What a turnaround chapter! I thought Tom was caught. He should be punished now, but it's all good in the end.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom glad you're surprised. I definitely wanted to keep you off balance. Don't count literary Tom out yet (this story or the other) it is about to take a turn but you'll have to wait and see where this goes. As always thank you for your enthusiasm and support hope you're still delighting in this tale.