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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 9:57 PM Title: Lina

Correction, Max. He wanted to BE PRESENT FOR HER BIRTHDAY. NOT A BIRTHDAY PRESENT! Janine was simply and deliberately misinterpreting.

"That's my theory and I'm stickin' to it."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 12:38 PM Title: Lina

Actually, Max, Tom was an overly pushy party-crasher. Janine merely _assumed_ he was Tess' birthday gift to her. And, you know what they say about erroneous assumptions! ;-)

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Date: September 15 2015 9:39 PM Title: Lina

Lina is a bit of a hypocrite, after giving Janine that speach about respecting each others boundaries, here she is lying to her daughters face and stealing soemthing that belongs to her, yes "belongs", he was her birthday present. 

 

Wonder what the resolution will be though, will Lina relent and give him back, will they share or will Lina flat out refuse. Cant wait to find out!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 8:32 PM Title: Lina

Wow! Lina is on the verge of having what was referred to, in Dean Martin's "Matt Helm" movies, as a real B.I.G.O. (Bureau of International Government and Organization). And, in front of her own daughter, yet!

Looks like chapter 25 will be featuring a shrunken man-age a trois. ;-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 7:48 PM Title: Lina

Wow, that was sexy!

One thing I didn't expect was Janine to find out so soon. (It felt soon to me.)

Wtf was Tom doing? It seemed like he wanted to get Janine's attention. The question is why. Did he want to show Janine that he found someone? Did he want to brag to Janine that he is happy and she is not? I'm not sure what was Tom's intentions, but it felt like he pleasured Lina a little too much. That conversation with Janine was like 10 seconds! I'm sure Tom could've waited, especially since he was in his favorite spot.

You did a great job describing Lina's activity in the bed. She locked the door, lied on her back and pulled the elastic to reveal Tom. I just loved that sequence of action!

Darn it Janine! Why did you have to interrupt the best part! Such an impatient girl. Man she is desperate to have Tom back.

Now these two have to have a long talk after this. Boy, what did Tom end up creating. I think Linda will punish him for this. Now that part I can't wait! But for this long talk, it can go in many directions. For the future of this story, I would like to see a back and forth action between the two as they both have their way with Tom. Janine may be cunning, but Karolina has the control. I can't for this debate! I'm rooting for Karolina!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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