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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 5:59 PM Title: Tess

"...Tess didn't get HIS brother back?"

Does Takuoni know something, about your upcoming chapters, that we don't?

Author's Response:

Um,no. Tess is definitely all girl.

Reviewer: takuoni Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2015 10:55 PM Title: Tess

Too bad Tess didn t get his brother back...

but hey he is very lucky anyway



Author's Response:

Not sure yet if Tess will get her brother back or if she does, in what condition.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2015 6:54 AM Title: Tess

And, with all due respect to Maximus, Tom might find Lina too much woman for him, even at normal-size!

So, there. :P

Author's Response:

Quite possibly, from a girl to a woman who has the experience of life to teach the naive Tom in ways he never could have imagined, we shall see how the dynamic shifts now that mother is involved and has access to resources far beyond Janine.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 10:41 PM Title: Tess

Let's just make something clear to everyone. Tom wants to spend time with a woman while he is tiny. That's why he left Tess, initially it was because of Janine, but that didn't work out the way he wanted. However, he rolls the dice again with Lina and this time gets his wish and his dream come true. This love that he is feeling now is why he left Tess and I don't see any reason for him to want to return to Tess as long as he is with Lina.

This is who Tom prefers: Lina>Tess>Sam>Janine.

The reason why I put Sam after Tess was because Sam has that same hunger in her eyes that Janine has. I'm not sure how horny she could be compared to Janine, but I'm sure Janine is breaking records for her cruelty so she is last in Tom's choice.

Lina wants someone to give her pleasure and someone to brighten her day. Tom provides the answer to both of her problems and Tom happily accepts his current position. We can see that in the last chapter when he opened his arms to Lina as she picked him up before bed.

Back to this chapter: Wow. You did a great job involving every main character into one chapter and no one suspected Lina to have Tom. You would think that after Tess saw Janine orgasm with Tom in the school hallway, that maybe when Lina paused on the stairs it was because of Tom. Then again, I love this little secret that Lina is holding from everyone. I don't want anyone else to know, yet.

I also am really appreciating how you are handling the Tess situation. I thought she would jeapordize the whole thing, but actually, Tess makes it more interesting and as you said, more realistic. They don't even believe that Lina could keep Tom hidden as well so they trust her, making her not a suspect. Perfect. After this visit, Tess and Sam are probably thinking that it probably wasn't actually Janine holding Tom hostage but rather he got lost or even worse. I'm sure Tess will return again, but now she has a lot to think about for the time being.

Same thing with Janine, she is pondering the same question. Where the hell is Tom? Is he in that closet that she locked up, did he die, did he leave the house, did her mom find him, is he living off scraps in the kitchen? So many possibilities. After all, Tom managed to escape from Janine. There's no doubt that Janine is probably thinking that Tom has found another way to live.

You want to know what the best part is? Karolina knows it all. Yep, she knows why she really paused on the stairs, she knows why Tess was there, and most of all, she knows why Janine is upset, and she is proud of it. I love her.

We need some perspective of Tom soon. Maybe some one on one action with Lina. This is great. The way she kept him in her panties during that whole episode and she managed to keep her composure just enough to convince the girls that there was nothing suspicious going on. I want a behind the scenes in that and I also wonder if Tom was even awake during that whole time? Or was he just moving in his sleep? Either way sounds hot. It's like a stealth mission, that's also very erotic.

Things are spicing up, I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

As long as I'm still on track for your original request, I'm glad you are enjoying.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 8:25 PM Title: Tess

Apparenty giantesslover missed the fact that Tom is enjoying his time with Lina and doing this willingly. Lina is the complete opposite of Janine and although his time with Lina has been titilating, I can't wait for Janine to get him back, because unlike carycomic, I find theres no such thing as too much of a devilish girl *weg*



Author's Response:

And Janine is oh so devilish, :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 5:54 PM Title: Tess

WTF? I thought that Lina was on Tom's side. This just keeps getting worse and worse. (For Tom. Not your story.)



Author's Response:

Tom is completely willing participant, Lina's is much more gentle than Janine

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 5:18 PM Title: Tess

I kind of had a hunch that Tom would want to spend all the next day "in bed." And, he probably required little (if any) encouragement from Lina!

Either that; or, she's decided to "adopt" him...against his will.

Author's Response:

Again I'll reference your story about wishing :) from frying pan to slow cooker!

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