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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 8:25 PM Title: Tess

Nice twist, wonder how good a freind Sam is? Will she try to make Tess a pet? Maybe pair up with Janine? Or will Tess shrink Sam to keep her grandfathers secret?

 

Can't wait to see what Janine has planed for Tom next!



Author's Response:

*wringing his hands together* muwahaha new depths for Janine, well maybe for Tom...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 5:29 PM Title: Tess

Well Tess screwed up. She let her emotions get to her.

Unlike her usual self, Tess was able to conceal her emotions around people. When she was hiding Tom in the party, she hid her worry if someone would see Tom. Then as she was looking for Tom, she used her earring as a decoy and no one read any fear on her facial expressions.

Tess played it beautifully, and now all of a sudden, she just let all her frustration out and Sam, as a true friend wants to help her solve Tess's "problem".

If Tess kept this to herself, Sam wouldn't be involved. And it's a shame becuase now Sam can ruin Tess's approach on Janine.

This is similar to the story "Sophie" becuase Sophie and Olivia had to eliminate the evidence. Here, Sam is an ally at the moment, but now she is also evidence. I wonder if Sam is a worthy partner for Tess and is she ready to help Tess.

Tess's grandfather wants less people to know about it becuase of what is at stake if authorities know about his equipment. He does not want it confiscated so he keeps his email as vague as possible and is secretly giving Tess clues and ways that Tess can get the info she needs. Her grandpa doesn't want to give her answers directly and is using a third party to help her.

I really, really, hope Tess doesn't take back Tom. Sure, Tom doesn't like what Janine is doing to him, but would be rather be with anyone else? Probably not. I hope somehow Tess decides to leave Tom to Janine and let her decide his fate.

Tess even said that if Tom likes to be in her panties, then so be it. Yes! I want that to happen. Tom loves to be in her panties! Maybe not by force, it is considered an honor to be in your crush's panties. In addition, the fact that she wants Tom to please her makes Tom more attracted to her.

I wonder how Tess is going to talk to Tom alone, especially when Janine has complete control over him. Also, I wonder if Janine will force Tom to say that he enjoys living with her. Tess is smart, she won't back down easily. However, Janine is wicked clever as well. Who will claim Tom? (I hope it's Janine!)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom you've always been very insightful in your reviews and I appreciate you taking the time to read my words and share your impressions. On a number of occasions your sage wisdom has helped me share a superior story. Thanks 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 7:41 AM Title: Tess

I can only hope Tess knows what she is doing or Tom will be stuck with Janine until she crushes him by accident. 



Author's Response:

I thinking it's like butterfly wings once touched will Tom figure it out before Janine does damage he won't be able to walk away from? Will Tess be there to catch him before he falls? Thanks for the read and review :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 7:21 AM Title: Tess

Another update!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 6:33 AM Title: Tess

Sorry, Grandpa Wentworth. But, Samira most _definitely_ needed to know. After all; Tom can't be rescued from his current predicament with a simple, single-handed snatch-and-grab! ;-)

Seriously, though; I love it when these stories half-seriously include a little spy-fi action. Thanks for doing that!

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