[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 7:17 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
"Be careful what you wish for..."
You know, come to think of it? That'd make a great title for my next story!
;-)
Author's Response:
Absolutely. For anyone reading this review be sure to check out Carycomic's 'BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR' it's an excellent read!
Date: August 17 2015 2:35 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
Tom's a pet. Wonder what Tess would think if she read this.
Author's Response:
Be careful what you wish for... :P
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 7:48 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
This story is fantastic, Janine is such a sexy giantess, love her attitude and treatment of Tom. One small critique, I think Tom would have been a little worse for wear after spending all day in her panties, would have liked to seen some descriptions about that as well as his time spent in there and being orgasmed on repeatedly. But you've already churned out 15 chapters and written a ton so I get why you may not have wanted to do that, lol.
Just being greedy because this story rocks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read the story and give it a review. I appreciate your input and have tried to make up for overlooking all day in the panties and being baby fresh. I sometimes get ahead of myself and miss some of the minutia that gives the story the extra pop. Thanks keeping me on my toes!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 2:31 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
This ring and chain just showed Tom that he is just a mere slave to Janine as she can do what she wants with him.
This chain could be used in many ways. She could just lift and lower Tom to any place on her. She can let him fall inside her, and take him out. Then let him fall, and take him out. Then again and again.
She could also use the chain to 'chain' him up to some place in her room so he doesn't escape.
Of course, if she doesn't want him to escape, she can just carry him inside her. She will always feel him so no need to use a chain.
Not sure what else she can do with a chain and collar besides humiliate him. I prefer him taped up and gagged instead of being chained. That way Tom is more helpless and the tape won't get in the way of some activities like a long chain.
The chain is a great symbolic way of breaking Tom down. Now he looks at Janine as an evil sexy cruel goddess and wonder if there is anyone or any hope that can save him.
This stuff is getting intense. I like it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Janine is still playing, trying to figure out what she wants to do next - wait for the hairbrush scene :-O
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 10:06 AM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
Well, Tom is now finding out just why such adolescent feelings are called "crushes."
The ones having them feel "crushed" when their affections aren't reciprocated (which is often the rule rather than the exception).
Author's Response:
Too very true,, unrequited love or objectified obsession, lethal mix.