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Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 12:06 AM Title: Monday Morning, Detention

gets very good



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Thank you for taking the time to read this story and provide a review, hope I can continue to keep you entertained

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 3:05 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention

Excellent

Continuar...

 

 



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Thanks for the thumbs up, :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 11:05 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention

Damn, Janine is sexy!

The way she took Tess's hand and brought it down to her underwear was amazing. I didn't even expect Tom to be there.

Also, the way that Janine said "where he wants to be" just made me cheer. It's true, he wants to be there. I wish I was Tom. The girl of your dreams keeping you in her panties. Wow!

And yes Tess, Tom does want to be there. No need to rescue him. Just enjoy the show that Janine is giving you.

Wow! How attractive is Janine? She can even lure Tess? Now that's seduction at its finest. Seduction to get what you want. However, I'm not sure what Janine wants to do with Tess. This is not one of those stories where Janine could shrink Tess. However, Janine can convince Tess to stop worrying about Tom. I think that's Janine's reason.

That kiss was just a tease. Janine is just sending an invitation to a second party. And this time it's private. 1 on 1 with a special tiny guest. I would feel a bit weird if Tess got intimate with Tom, so I do wonder where is this going.

Janine wants to share Tom? No way! I thought she wanted Tom for herself. Perhaps it's just a way to get Tess off her back. I'm not sure. I just hope Janine knows what she is doing becuase I don't want her to lose Tom to Tess. I like Tom as Janine's pet, or even Karolina's pet. But Tess, hmm, I wonder what Janine has in mind.

I love Miss Addison's reaction. And also Janine's reply was fantastic. It made it so awkward that Miss Addison didn't want to talk to them anymore.

Great stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Janine is damn sexy, and the queen of manipulation, she's just finding her groove, or at least Tom is...

Reviewer: takuoni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 8:45 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention

Amazing !  Janine is so hungry for sexy times.

The threesome is such a good idea, it has to happen !

(And the best way for Tess to take his brother back)



Author's Response:

Janine is flush with adolescent hormones, poor girl is a slave to her own body chemsitry, she...just...can't...help...herself!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 7:19 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention

So, "lesbian" clear about this: Tess is about to come out of the proverbial closet?

Author's Response:

Teenaged confusion and angst, uncertainly and indecision marked by a fledgling need for autonomy, not necessarily a resident of Sapphos

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 6:15 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention

*gasps*

Looks like Tom's in a BIG problem!

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

Author's Response:

Big but still very tight, oh my

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