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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 6:57 AM Title: Tess

Okay, in this story I am totally with Tess.  The thing about Tess is I don’t really see her as an enabler.  I think at this moment, that’s how she sees herself, but that’s not really her motivation.  I think she sees here action through the eyes of their consequences.  She seems more motivated by sympathy (though she wouldn’t admit it) and as providing a pressure release for Tom, who seems to be a disaster waiting to happen.

She was probably feeling warned about this by his behavior during incest tease scenes.  And sees him as having a need to have things “his way” since he has so little control over his situation.

There’s a lot of chapters to go, we’ll see if I’m reading her right.

BTW...his favorite band is Injustice?  A band called Injustice?  In your stories?  HA!  Is one of their songs “Little Man Say’s That’s Not Fair?”  That is too perfect.

I do like how this chapter deals with real emotional fallout from Tom’s fantasy.  Great work.

The grandpa mystery really has me.  I gotta know!  I gotta know!

Peace, and thanks.

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Hi pixl8ed,

 

Tess will continue to be, for want of a better phrase, the 'tragic' figure in this tale. i realize you're still wrestling with early chapter and much has transpired in teh year plus this story has been unfolding. As for Injustice, it was a fictitious band created for my story Fan Girls, where the band gets shrunk. there will be twists and turns and explorations aplenty yet to come. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2015 9:21 AM Title: Tess

Can you say "Top-secret Federal facility," Tess?

Insert X-FILES theme, here.

Author's Response:

"There is no such facility," says the faceless man half concealed in the shadows, tendrils of smoke crawling off the end of his cigarette as he fades back into the gloom,

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 7:09 PM Title: Tess

Whoa! So this must be the twist that you were adding to this story! A shrunken grandfather as well?!! Hmm. Does this mean that Tess's grandpa is under the care of some women at a nursing home? That could be interesting, unless it's just speculation from Tess.

So Tess wants answers and decides that the best way is to spend time with Janine and secretly get some answers without Janine knowing. It would be funny if Tom was "with Janine" when Tess talks to her.

Also, if Tess does in fact spot Tom, she might think that Tom is enjoying himself, and won't bother taking him. Perhaps she wont see Tom's fear in his eyes and instead sees joy. Surely, then Tess will let Janine keep Tom. (I hope Tess doesn't take Tom back.)

I wonder why the grandpa was so worried and said it was urgent. Is there a side effect to the shrinking or is the shrinking part that makes it urgent. I hope it's just the shrinking that got her grandpa worried.

Don't worry Tess, Tom will definatley survive in Janine's house. Besides, what could go wrong in a house with two lovely women such as Janine and Karolina? Nothing, becuase this story is about to have its fun!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 5:35 PM Title: Tess

Oooh...

Lovin' the suspense!

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