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Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 7:09 PM Title: The Party

Loving it! Can't wait to see what happens to Tom later on!

Author's Response:

Thanks GiantessLover122, hope you continue to enjoy as this tale unfolds!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 6:58 PM Title: The Party

Heck yeah! Now this is what I'm talking about!

Tom in a party with 12 hot girls and a hot mom. Not to mention his sister adding a bit more fun to the story as she tries to hide his presence.

Karolina? Hmm. I kinda like it. You said it was gonna be close to the ones I've mentioned and the closest was Carla. Well......I guess they are close.

I already like Karolina's behaviour. She is powerful and has authority and has command over the entire party. Not to mention that she is beautiful in Tom's opinion which makes her that much attractive to him.

Lucky Tom. Able to hear girls talk about how hot you are. That's when you know you are doing something right.

When Tess told Tom of her gift to Janine, my heart was pounding! I mean, that was freaking sexy! A miniature version of Tom, with a bow around his waist and dangled by a key chain! That sounds like some kinky ideas right there.

Tess tucked Tom into her purse and the she was "careful in how she closed it". So if Tess closed it, how did Tom get out? Could it be open from the inside, or was there still an opening for Tom to crawl out of? Might need some clarification on that.

I wonder why Tom got out of the purse? To explore the giant girls, or to see his favorite band play? Or both? It's interesting, becuase if he wants to see the concert, then he better climb something to get a good view. I wonder who is the tallest person in this house......? That person may be Tom's best choice.

I'm so happy that the party has started! Karoline is better than I expected and Tess is doing a great job (attempt) at trying to control Tom. Also, now Tom is out on the run! Things will be really really interesting now, especially without the protection of Tess.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 5:23 PM Title: The Party

To paraphrase that old sing-song warning: "He'll be SAAAAAAW-RHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"


*Phonetically misspelled similar to the semi-ebonic version of "sweet."

Author's Response:

The idiom 'be careful what you wish for' seems to spring to mind

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