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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2015 12:30 PM Title: Holiday's End

Don't do it, Tess. Otherwise, you might as well start taking banjo lessons!

"Doot-doo-DOOT-Doo-doot-doo-DOOT-doo-Doot."

Author's Response:

Only time will tell, da-da-dum-da-dum. Sibling realtionships can be perplexing under the best of circumstances, we'll see where this goes, not really sure yet.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 8:22 PM Title: Holiday's End

(I'm playing into character.) Tom's thoughts:

I didn't plan on some sister fun, but I guess I can let it slide. After all, she did save my life.

If this wasn't my sister, I would've loved to be staying in her panties. I really hope my sister doesn't do what I think she is gonna do. Any girl but her.

Back to TomSpeedy:
Why is Tom's mother's name Raphaella? It reminds of the ninja turtle. Lol.

I like the name Tess, and Janine. I hope you have a good name for Janine's mother. I hope her name is one of the following: Carla, Lisa, Mary, Rachel, Rebecca, (Or Selene.) I've always liked the name Seleine from your other stories. Also, Selena is a nice name too. Surprise me. :)

Man, I remember that chest bursting creature from Aliens. That was crazy! I never saw it coming. So, Was Tom really about to burst like that? That must be a lot of pressure in her bra. Other people might notice a bulge if it's that ready to burst.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Tom is just antagonizing his sister to be a bratty brother. Her body is responding automatically to the stimulus, the complication is how the stimulus is occuring. you'll meet Janine's mother soon enough, the name is close to one you've listed coincidentally. No Tom wasn't going to burst out, being he's too tiny and wouldn't be able to tear through the fabric, however Tess is on heightened alert fearing they will be detected. Again, i know I've been meandering around the story line you requested, but I hope I am still on track and you're enjoying it. cheers.

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