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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 8:46 PM Title: Tom's Story

Those stories from Tom Sr. Should have been dirtier. I bet Tom doesn't care about the smell and taste of her aunt, especially since young Tom knows well how pussy taste. Tom tasted 6 vaginas. (Felt like more, right?)

I think Tom Sr. Should have described the actions that Dona did. Where she put him, how did they sleep, how they had fun, how she hid Tom Sr. And so on....

Also, Dona should whisper in young Tom's ear about ideas that she will tell the other women. Example: "Tom, your grandfather has told me of your adventures, and I in fact am friends with Lina and Katie. I'm going to share with them, all my crazy ideas on how to keep you as a toy for years, just like how I have treated your grandfather. Enjoy being normal sized, because you time is running out." Tom looked at his aunt with new found fear. She smiled a grin the looked similar to what he would use on the ladies. It made him shiver in fear. She left the room, leaving Tom in shock.

When Dona squeezed Tom's foot, little did Tom know that she inserted a needle filled with a shrinking substance. Her squeeze disguised the pain and Tom has no idea. The question is why would Dona want to shrink Tom. Dona is interested in older men, so this is not a selfish move. Someone must have hired her to do this. Lina? Miss Harwood? Janine? Man, this is crazy. I bet Dona didn't even put anything into Tom's foot and I just keep expecting surprises from Duggernaut.

I love how honest Tom Sr. was with his fantasy. I would love to go to some discussion board meeting filled with former shrinkees and listen to all their stories.

This story is growing on me. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know seems like a lot more for our hero though it's still more than his grandfather tee hee

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 8:29 PM Title: Tom's Story

I was seconds late

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 11:17 AM Title: Tom's Story

Duggernaut,

What do you mean by broken?

You mean that both Tom's are stuck as normal? Will they shrink back after 24 hours?

Is that why Tom sr is grinning? He knows that Tom will shrink? Maybe you shrink while having sex?

Did Lina hack it? Miss Harwood hacked it? (Now that's scary and hot.)

I thought your response would be a spoiler, it kinda is, but I'm trying to figure out how it is broken. I mean, it seems fine to me. Both Tom's are normal sized.

I'm curious what you got up your sleeve this time.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 2:44 PM Title: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: then again, what if Grandpa Tom's re-enlargement doesn't work? Will Lina get to take Little Tom to Sweden, after all? if so, will Jessica have another chance to steal him for herself? Maybe even with some help from Tatiana (who might be a Russian Mob princess)?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 12:49 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic,

I was wondering the same thing! We have no idea what he is feeling because Duggernaut just disguises emotional as what Tom is feeling.

Tom could be happy that he will be restored, or he could be sad that he can't get inside a vagina anymore.

Also, Tom could also be surprised to see his mom not offer to take care of him, but instead propose a solution that he thought wasn't possible.

If that was me, I would be sad. I liked being small. It had its ups and downs but Tom was living the dream with all these lovely women. While being restored is great, it just goes back to normal. An average life again. From awesome to average. That's how I see it.

Perhaps it's a combination. He is overwhelmed with emotion so maybe it's a bunch of thoughts together. Getting restored, not trapped with mom, not getting to be intimate with a giantess, actually having to do homework again, and so on.

So many possibilities. And if Tom thought this was a lot to take in, then wait until he hears his grandpa's story! I can't wait to hear that! (And see young Tom's reaction.)

Author's Response:

So many possibilities. . . 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 2:13 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Darkness,

I believe the end notes are to describe what happens in the next chapter. That would be the 2 mothers with their own agendas for what to do with Tom. The older Tom is just a bystander, and he isn't the focus. These two mothers are focused on the little Tom which I guess is why only 1 Tom is mentioned.

@tinyman,

Tess has had thoughts about it, but she has refused to let those thoughts come to her. Even Janine early on has tried to lure Tess into some fun with Tom but she declined. If anything, Tess might be interested in women anyway, especially since Janine and Tess were kissing each other. I think Tess and Raphaella also are aware that Tom is part of their family and don't find the intimate behavior as attractive as the other ladies.

Reviewer: tinyman91 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 1:07 PM Title: Tom's Story

I'd like to see Tess finally get to have some "alone" time with ol' tommy boy. Ain't fair that everyone else gets to play around with the boy toy and she has to be left out.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2016 7:40 AM Title: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: Yes, Raphaella knows Tom Sr was shrunk, Dona told Raphaella, remember? Dona and Grandpa Tom even told her it was possible to restore Tom to fullsize.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 8:31 PM Title: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: let us keep in mind the immortal words of Wm. Fakespeare.

"To snooze or to lose? That...is the question."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 6:10 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic,

Hey, thats my job to congratulate him. Well, I guess it doesn't matter, I bet we consist of 300 of these reviews anyway. Haha!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 9:58 PM Title: Tom's Story

Addison has been covering for Tom, even after she lost him, so i'd disagree on that. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 6:56 PM Title: Tom's Story

Congrats! Tom's story is now the 3rd most read story on this site!

Author's Response:

Thanks. Holy cow that's a lot of reads.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 6:22 PM Title: Tom's Story

I think what needs to happen next is the journey to Lina's place and then Lina finally gets her fun after like 80 chapters.

While they are waiting for Tom's mom, Lina can have her fun with Tom and maybe the lawyer can show up too. Just a thought.

While I love Katie and Cassidy, I believe it's time Tom should travel soon. (However, I would love to see Lina and Katie have fun with Tom at the same time. Now that would be something.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know you've missed Lina, but miss Harwood has filled in admirably i'm sure. :)

Reviewer: Northgate Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 11:56 AM Title: Tom's Story

Been reading since you started but I haven't commented in a while.  Just finished chapter 116 and the action is as good as ever.  I have two scenarios that I'd love to see....

1. Janine and Tom realize they are in love and really run away Everyone is trying to find them and meanwhile Janine and Tom's bedroom escapades go to the next level.

2, Jessica finds a way to kidnap Tom without anyone suspecting her.  Tom is initially delighted till he finds that she wants to play non-sexual games with him that could be harardous to his health.  Jessica keeps upping the ante while Tom tries to contact help to get rescued before she goes to far. 

WHatever you decide to do thank you and keep m coming!

North



Author's Response:

Thanks. I"m starting to see where this one is heading... for better or worse.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 2:57 AM Title: Tom's Story

please more

However, the size does not matter

tom is proved to us

I can not wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

more on the way!!!

Reviewer: ramsfan100 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 11:26 PM Title: Tom's Story

I didn't mean sex. I meant hanging out, talking. Does Raphaella and Donatella have sisters named Michaella and leonaella too?

Author's Response:

I think we can both agree, Janine is an absolute shredder! I think in the first half dozen reviews of this story, TomSpeedy mentioned the name Raphaella made him think of the sewer dwelling quartet.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2016 2:30 AM Title: Tom's Story

Janine + Cassidy + Tess tom = harem
not only lost TOMA deep in their interiors during yoga.
Probably there will get lost hehehe.



Author's Response:

Unless he had something tied to his foot

Reviewer: ramsfan100 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 4:24 PM Title: Tom's Story

Tom and Tess need some bonding time.

Author's Response:

I've fought the impulse to have her give in thus far but anything can happen.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 4:11 PM Title: Tom's Story

This story is already a hit !!!
[Reviews - 672]
Chapter 115
I wonder what will happen in the next chapter

Is Janine Cassidy Tess  toma hide from the rest?

Please more



Author's Response:

It's crazy I know! 

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2016 5:32 PM Title: Tom's Story

Just reviewing to be the 666th review. HAIL SATAN!

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